|Reviews for Those who are About to Die Salute You|
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/17
To tell you the truth while I find the idea intriguing, there is so many Harry Potter gets beat mercilessly by his family storys out there that it's just disturbing. Reading roughly three chapters of mistreatment is rather much. I did go skim chapter three but I just can't see the point for it. I do get that your going with the whole Spartan theme. It's just not for me. Although you do write very well and I didn't have to spend ten minutes trying to decipher spelling and grammar mistakes so great job all the same
| jchangpa chapter 6 . 5/12
After a really bad start it improve a little and then it dye. What do Flophard had to do with the first year, also what do Ginny has to do with it too, and to make i better or worst a friendly Draco. From a previous chapter I was a bad feeling, Harry only has a male fried ? so which multi relationships is this story a male to male?
| jchangpa chapter 2 . 5/12
not sure where this goes, but sure it can be better because it only show abuse on a minor.
| Mohammad.Alzo chapter 13 . 4/19
Cliff hanger?! Noooooo!
| god of all chapter 13 . 4/14
Great chapter story so far please continue this story soon
| vampwalker709 chapter 6 . 4/13
Why make harry not rich even in cannon he is and you say you have
a super harry the whole reason i read this yeah his powers are cool
but he is not super in fact fan fiction wise he is just average i have seen
stories were authors say specifically that harry will not be supper and yet
there harry is stronger richer and uses what he has more often and better then your
the fact you release average 4 chapters a year and they aren't even long.
Like i said i came for a supper harry i left slightly disappointed.
| vampwalker709 chapter 5 . 4/13
So we got us a manipulative dumbles huh.
Hope harry gets a snake familiar seeing as he said he liked them earlier
and honestly hedwig is getting boring rarely does anyone switch her out
for a new animal or owl.
| vampwalker709 chapter 4 . 4/13
Really hope he has a different wand then canon and he is a lord
or at least filthy rich also hope he doesn't hide his wandless magic and
if he does he is at least considered a genius in class.
Great chapter love his over all experience still think he should have found a
way to defend himself but now see why he did the story.
| Elle Ryder chapter 13 . 4/13
Great chapter :)
| vampwalker709 chapter 3 . 4/13
An he doesn't think maybe he could use this energy to defend himself huh.
| carick of hunter moon chapter 13 . 4/13
Very good total ... I up to no good
| carick of hunter moon chapter 12 . 4/13
good alternative character development R/H/D
| vampwalker709 chapter 2 . 4/13
What the fuck harry reads at a library he should know if he goes to
the cops dursleys will get arrested yet he does not?
Other then the obvious errors in logic great chapter love that
he fought back and hope vernon gets his beating on a little kid is fucking
sick i severely hope harry is crippled because of this and hope vernon gets arrested
and people find out that those little fucking juveniles have been beating harry
for at least a couple of hope that fat lard dudley fucking dies.
Great chapter love the story vernon pisses me off.
| carick of hunter moon chapter 11 . 4/13
nice twist on canon
| vampwalker709 chapter 1 . 4/13
An you said you weren't careless psychopath please.
Great start though the first part is a bit confusing.