|Reviews for Those who are About to Die Salute You|
| GL chapter 12 . 3/17
Well it's not much but keep trying maybe you will get better!:)
| GL chapter 5 . 3/17
You should get the 'shift key' fixed on your computer, they come in really handy when you're typing fanfiction.
| LtsHrIt4ThBoyz chapter 13 . 11/2/2015
Son of a B! I noted that this was incomplete and that your last post was in APRIL and it is now NOVEMBER and, after reading, I further realized that your 'commitment' to writing is 'catch as catch can', at best, but with YOU notating your own less than enthusiastic dedication to your own creation, I'd never have guessed that you'd leave your readers hanging on a cliffie for seven months...and GLEEFULLY, at that! WOW.
I'd decided to follow this fic despite the typos, spelling, grammar, and vocabulary errors because the premise and content were original and intriguing, but now I'm not so sure.
I understand that you're NOT BEING PAID to write fan fiction, but 99% of the writers here write because they feel COMPELLED to do so; it's their avocation; their LOVE of the written word AND their love for their READERS.
I'd truly like to see where this is headed, as it's a very GOOD story, but I believe that we, your readers, would like to see a bit more effort put in to a slightly more frequent update schedule. Ya know?
I *get* 'busy' and I really, truly hope that you are well and fine and soon to return to write another day!
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/17/2015
To tell you the truth while I find the idea intriguing, there is so many Harry Potter gets beat mercilessly by his family storys out there that it's just disturbing. Reading roughly three chapters of mistreatment is rather much. I did go skim chapter three but I just can't see the point for it. I do get that your going with the whole Spartan theme. It's just not for me. Although you do write very well and I didn't have to spend ten minutes trying to decipher spelling and grammar mistakes so great job all the same
| jchangpa chapter 6 . 5/12/2015
After a really bad start it improve a little and then it dye. What do Flophard had to do with the first year, also what do Ginny has to do with it too, and to make i better or worst a friendly Draco. From a previous chapter I was a bad feeling, Harry only has a male fried ? so which multi relationships is this story a male to male?
| jchangpa chapter 2 . 5/12/2015
not sure where this goes, but sure it can be better because it only show abuse on a minor.
| Mohammad.Alzo chapter 13 . 4/19/2015
Cliff hanger?! Noooooo!
| god of all chapter 13 . 4/14/2015
Great chapter story so far please continue this story soon
| vampwalker709 chapter 6 . 4/13/2015
Why make harry not rich even in cannon he is and you say you have
a super harry the whole reason i read this yeah his powers are cool
but he is not super in fact fan fiction wise he is just average i have seen
stories were authors say specifically that harry will not be supper and yet
there harry is stronger richer and uses what he has more often and better then your
the fact you release average 4 chapters a year and they aren't even long.
Like i said i came for a supper harry i left slightly disappointed.
| vampwalker709 chapter 5 . 4/13/2015
So we got us a manipulative dumbles huh.
Hope harry gets a snake familiar seeing as he said he liked them earlier
and honestly hedwig is getting boring rarely does anyone switch her out
for a new animal or owl.
| vampwalker709 chapter 4 . 4/13/2015
Really hope he has a different wand then canon and he is a lord
or at least filthy rich also hope he doesn't hide his wandless magic and
if he does he is at least considered a genius in class.
Great chapter love his over all experience still think he should have found a
way to defend himself but now see why he did the story.
| Elle Ryder chapter 13 . 4/13/2015
Great chapter :)
| vampwalker709 chapter 3 . 4/13/2015
An he doesn't think maybe he could use this energy to defend himself huh.
| carick of hunter moon chapter 13 . 4/13/2015
Very good total ... I up to no good
| carick of hunter moon chapter 12 . 4/13/2015
good alternative character development R/H/D