the dialogue for harry is...REALLY bad. he talks like an adult, and not like a high school dropout kind either. for fuck sake he's 11.

not really a fan. this was just super dry info dumping, with harry acting super OOC. the story is...kinda poorly written.

Whelp, I got this far then realized the sequal was left incomplete, the author moved to AO3 and hasn't posted in 4 years, and at that point lost the will to read further.

its Scotland in Jan, its dark by 4pm

Britain is the total, you did not need to add on Scotland and wales yet miss out Northern Ireland. just fyi

oh how i want the dursleys to fully feel the impact of their treatment of harry and be horrified

how could Remus not apparate to from Wales to Little Whinging in 1 go yet Sirius can go from Howarts to London in 1 go with passengers?

omg i love this story, cant believe its taken so long to read it

Oddly enough that right there was a great opening chapter. Nice work.

Oui! une prophétie légitime en cours bien plus fine que celle de la fraude de prof.
je cours vers la suite.

Plot hole, since DEs have no problem throwing AKs around all Lucius or Narcissa has to do is kill Crouch Jr and then there isn't anyone to set off the curse.

Adorable story. I love Hedwig. She's a BAMF. Thanks for sharing

I find it curious and odd that so many people write about xmas as a holiday for wizards and witches. You had Harry state for Halloween that they should celebrate Samhain instead. Imagine my confusion that rather than Yule or some pagan ritual holiday, you have them celebrate xmas, which makes zero sense. K

I love Hedwig.

I also dig a more ambitious Harry (buying the clothes and taking the key)

Great story