|Reviews for One Piece: Growing up with Whitebeard!|
| CelestialPirateQueen chapter 12 . 3/25
*Gasp* you forgot Izo!
| Vanessa Masters chapter 9 . 2/6
Luffy had pouted insistently after Mihawk's last visit, as he refused to set foot on the ship again after that, at least until his pride recovered from the severe blow. Currently, the commanders, led by Marco were developing photos from that fateful day. The pictures could finally be seen, and it was admittedly quite disturbing.
The fearsome Mihawk, was sitting in a small chair glowering at the table in a pink, frilly, dress, with a tiara on his head, curtesy of Luffy, both he and Vista were wearing ungodly amounts of make-up. Yep, it would be a while until Mihawk next visited again, as his pride might not ever recover from that blow. Luffy appeared at the doorway, and tugged on Marco's arm to see the picture,
"Waht do you think, Luf?" The little girl inspected the picture silently, with a critical eye before stating her opinion,
"Vista was right. I should have used the Strawberry Pink Blast lipstick, not the Red Summerbreeze afterall!" the whole group near died from laughter. It only got worse with Luffy's next staement, "But still, Hawky-chan looks pretty!" The crews laughter could be heard all the way to the East Blue.
Lol! Oh lord, poor mihawk. XD
| Vanessa Masters chapter 8 . 2/6
Whitebeard, Thatch, Marco, Ace, and Sabo all immediately jumped down from the figure head as they got closer. Luffy bothered to summon enough courage to come out from her hiding place, though she still held onto Mihawk, who had yet to protest. Marco's eyes widened, as his expression changed into relief. He ran up to Luffy and immediately engulfed his little sister in a bone-crushing hug. Much to the small girls protests, which were ignored in favor of trying to figure out one question: WHAT THE HELL WAS SHE THINKING!
Several minutes of scolding followed as Marco yelled in pent up fury at the girl's sudden disappearance, reminding her of the dangers of leaving the ship, no matter the situation, without parental supervision, and how lucky she was that no marines didn't see her. Marco wouldn't bring up that one particular ship had had an unlucky run-in with the appearantly dangerous seven year old. That could wait till later. And just before Luffy could say anything else, Marco again hugged her, this time, crying, much to the shock of everyone present. Marco was not one to cry, no matter the situation, or so they had thought. Even Whitebeard, who had known Marco the longest, had not seen the man cry in years, too many to count.
"I'm just glad you're okay!" Luffy blinked in shock as she returned the hug. Feeling very warm and safe now, she proceeded to join Marco in his blubbering like a baby. As Ace would put it.
"WAAAHHH! Marco! I want to go HOOMMEE! I miss the Moby Dick! And Pops and...Take me home please!" Everyone watching just laughed at the scene. It was all too cute, as the two continued to sob hysterically. Mihawk sighed as Shanks approached him,
"Cute picture huh?" the red haired man asked highly amused at the scene slightly. Mihawk huffed indignantly as he gave his responce.
"I'm just glad she's leaving." he blanched at the Yonko, who just smiled knowingly at him. In the distance they could hear the sudden call from Luffy, who was now being held up on Marco's shoulder as the man stood at the figure head of the Moby Dick.
"Bye Hawky-chan! Me, Marco, Ace, and Sabo will come visit sometime so you won't get lonely!" Mihawk sighed exasperatedly as the others laughed their heads off at his expense.
Awwwwww. So precious!
| Vanessa Masters chapter 4 . 1/4
The end. White beard is suuuuuuuuch a sweet pops. :)
| Vanessa Masters chapter 3 . 1/4
The crew slowly lead to deal with the kids on the ship :D
| Vanessa Masters chapter 2 . 1/4
Except for the three troublemaking siblings, of course. They were sweet kids, perfectly fine, considering the fact that just one of them could bring down one a fully grown man three times their size all on their own. And that was just the four year old little sister. According to Makino, the kids names, from oldest to youngest, were Sabo, Ace, and Luffia, though she preferred it if you called her Luffy. Appearantly there was a rumor that had been going about. Supposedly all three of them had eaten a Devil Fruit, and so as a result, the trio were known as the Devil Siblings, though the name fit regardless of whether or not they had Devil Fruit powers. For instance, right now.
At some point during the party, Ace had snuck in and smashed a bottle of alcohol on top of Thatch's head. Of course the boy quickly got away to avoid suspicion from the others. Despite being seen by Marco, Jozu, and Whitebeard himself, all chaos reigned supreme as a bar fight started up, when Thatch, in his drunkenness, hit the nearest person to him, blaming him for it. The trio of siblings sat off to the side, in rapt amusement, as the majority of the Whitebeard Pirates began beating each other to a pulp. Their entertainment ended though, when Whitebeard finally intervened, deciding that despite how funny it was that just one little brat could get all of them fighting each other, it was a bad idea to let them wreck Makino's bar.
They all finally settled own, and when Whitebeard turned to the children, they were long gone. The old pirate captain heaved a sigh as once again, the children had proven quite clearly, that they did not welcome the Whitebeard Pirates. He began to wonder about what he should do to get the kids to stop causing so much trouble. Marco seeing his captain's little dilema, decided to make the man's job easier, and left in search of the Troublesome Trio, which was a nickname that the whole crew had come up with one day after another one of their little incidents, and see if he could get them to at least stop causing so much havoc around town and with the crew.
Awwww~ luffy clinging to Marco and whitebeard, sweet.
| Vanessa Masters chapter 1 . 1/4
Intrigued! Def gonna read this to the end!
| DarkDragonessFliesEveryWhere chapter 13 . 8/31/2016
I found it funny for Miss. Kitty to be dragged back and being hit with the frying pan. I like the tea parties a lot!
| Desses Gothique chapter 16 . 8/30/2016
| CaitiAthena chapter 3 . 7/28/2016
cool I wish Luffy actually had that power
| CaitiAthena chapter 2 . 7/28/2016
| PyruxDeltax chapter 13 . 6/8/2016
Will you be adding the revolutionaries to the Tea Parties? And Whens Dragon going to show up?
| Iviidiis chapter 17 . 5/12/2016
Your story is great! I hope you've found your motivation again to update this story )
| PyruxDeltax chapter 17 . 5/5/2016
When are you going to update your One Piece stories?
| Sylviana chapter 13 . 2/18/2016
OMFG if youre sayingthat this isnt too funny, you are dead to me, kami-sama. THIS IS SO... SO...
I CANNOT DESCRIBE IT IN WORDS.
all hail author san and little girl luffy.
praise the genius who made this story possible