Reviews for Catwoman
Holscad chapter 8 . 9/14/2013
This was a beautiful chapter. I loved the honesty she had with Alice and Rose. And her reslization that she belongs in Forks and there will be no moving on from it. Her love for her friends in Forks is so touching. It seems she has more insight than Alice and Rose. But it is always more difficult for women to choose careers over love than when men do it. The old double standard. Not fair but it is what it is. I hope the girls find their way back to love...
Holscad chapter 7 . 9/14/2013
This was so insightful! So Edward has tried to end his life? Oh so sad. But its good to know that he has feelings for her. It goes to show people are seldom what they appear to be. Bella has a lot to learn about him :-)
Holscad chapter 6 . 9/14/2013
LOVED this chapter! Bella's inner dialogue and observations are hilarious!
Holscad chapter 5 . 9/13/2013
They were doing so well until the cat conversation! I love how bella came right out and asked if he had a girlfriend! And Edward had asked about her status. They are cute and awkward together. So so loving this tale...
Holscad chapter 4 . 9/13/2013
Omg I started laughing so hard when bella said she threw bread at Edward and Angela said "during communion?" That just cracked me up! And I liked the "grasshopper" remark...awww yes...the wonderful shows of the 70's :-) and how she noticed they talked of going home like they lived together...sigh...this is so fun to read...
Holscad chapter 3 . 9/13/2013
This made me want to bake something. Think I will make homemade biscuits for dinner tonight :-)
Holscad chapter 2 . 9/13/2013
I love your stories and the way you write. Your descriptions and voicing Bella's feelings are stellar. I am already in love with this :-)
beckysue999 chapter 6 . 8/28/2013
"...when he showed up all buckley and patchy. The uniform was very familiar to me, and always made me a little sad because of Charlie. But it made me a little glad too, and although Charlie was more wiry and Jacob more bulky, if I squinted and cut off Jacob's head and ignored his arms, I could pretend for a few seconds it was Dad.
"'H…howdy there," I said, doing my photo shop thing.
"'What's wrong with your eyes?" he asked, palms flat on my desk, arms spread wide.
"I wanted to say, hold that position, because with his arms out like that I could almost chop them right off, and yeah, Charlie wasn't in there at all.
"I blinked hard a few times and took off my black rimmed glasses. 'Too much computer work. ..."

Such amazing writing, and beautiful use of words and ideas. I love how you have Bella express herself - so descriptive and telling. So glad I found this story...
dustybritches01 chapter 9 . 8/6/2013
And there it was, the thud of his heart beneath my cheek.-beautiful.
Ladybear0506 chapter 55 . 7/30/2013
Great story! I was worries it would be horribly angsty but not at all loved it.
Ladybear0506 chapter 15 . 7/29/2013
Man she's all over the place!
arhs28 chapter 4 . 7/17/2013
Riley sounds like a cutie pie. I can see Edward letting him wipe his greasy fingers on his shirt.
arhs28 chapter 2 . 7/17/2013
He better not take those cats away! Poor thing needs them.
Guest chapter 52 . 6/30/2013
That was just mean. What's up with Edward? He is there five seconds and he's judging everyone, then Bella doesn't need James there cause Edwards there now. What a bunch of jerks!
Guest chapter 41 . 6/30/2013
I hate bully's.
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