|Reviews for The Winds of Change|
| Annoy mouse chapter 2 . 10/5/2014
First of all, why wasn't his house watched by Death Eaters and Order of the Phoenix members? How was he able to walk about without being kidnapped? How was he able to walk about Diagon Ally freely?
How was Hermione's house not destroyed?
Why didn't Dumbledore just stun, compel, and obliviate them? He seems apt to do so.
Add in little things, like him using his invisibility cloak, maybe some Goblin procured potions/enchantment/spell to remain unnoticed, wards for Hermione's house etc to make this story better.
| DylanL chapter 22 . 3/11/2014
Wow that is a great ending. Though old ppl sex is a bit odd to think about and also the date for the party should be 2107 not 3007 if it was only 100 years after the flight. I also don't think magical can live for 250 years either but this is ur story. I do want to know wat happened to cause chapter 16 and based on time turner traveling in the books they should have appeared in Nevada not Hogwarts when it got done unwinding. Also wat is up with all those pound signs at the end was that a censored part or wat. And maybe harry was abducted by the aliens or he cause a paradox when he went back in time so that is when his body disappeared from to resolve it. Sorry for the complaints and theories about ur story if u found them in any small way offensive, I meant no disrespect and very much enjoyed ur story, but no that I think about it there were a few errors like Hermione telling flies she had never been on a formal date with harry when she did the night harry took her to dinner and the theater and that was after he proposed and he took her virginity in the boat which is another thing that was said to not have happened BC in a later chapter it said she was waiting til they were married.
| DylanL chapter 12 . 3/11/2014
Hi. I have read a few of ur stories and loved them all. The reason I am review here inst of when I finish the story is that I wanted to say that this chapter reminded me of the episode of M*A*S*H where Hawkeye lost his sight for a week, especially the part with Susan and Hannah and Gary in the Hufflepuff rooms and Harry's actions while there. Well I'm off to read the rest of this so far amazing story, and cannabis would completely explain Luna and her dad.
| CaBuckeye chapter 22 . 12/24/2013
Bravo! Wonderfully magnificent ending to a fantastically crafted story 9she types as tears are flooding her keyboard...) Thank you for your creative effort.
| Child of Dreams chapter 22 . 7/8/2013
Pixel and Stephanie Forever, you are in big, BIG trouble!
| pfeil chapter 9 . 12/13/2012
"Has Dobby remembered to get some sound proofing for our special room?"
Hermione wants Harry to have a silenced room in which to play with her? Mind gutter out...
| the stargate time traveller chapter 21 . 10/29/2012
| red neo ranger chapter 22 . 8/7/2012
loved it it made me laugh and feel this what a fanfic should be like
| jediprankster chapter 22 . 8/7/2012
A fitting end. The whole last flight of the firebolt was annoying. It just seemed to drag on and on and on. After reading the note at the end, I understand why it was like that, but it only makes it a little less annoying.
I recognized the ending of Babylon 5. I loved that show. I just wish they had known earlier that they were going to get a fifth season. They thought they were ending with the fourth season, so they re-wrote it to give some closure. Then they learn, 'oh, by the way, you get another season', and by then too much had been filmed to undo the closure in season four. The final season was good, but felt a bit disconnected from the rest. It would have been so much better if they had known the whole time.
And the compass on the firebolt was a gift from Hermione... I think. It was a gift from someone.
This was a good story, and I really enjoyed it. I hope you keep writing.
| jediprankster chapter 21 . 8/7/2012
I loved the end of this chapter. Yes, it was an almost word for word (with names changed) the scene between Thor and Senator Kinsey in a season 6 episode of Stargate SG1, but it was still great. Ah, I love the Stargate shows. I was sad to see Universe cancelled after only two seasons. Oh well. Can't have everything.
You know, I didn't just like the end of this chapter. I liked the whole thing. I am curious why they needed the sand from the Time Turners.
| Renaissancebooklover108 chapter 22 . 7/26/2012
wow, that ending paragraph... amazing :O
| branwen-s chapter 22 . 7/24/2012
Wonderful story. I enjoyed it immensely.
| azphxbrd chapter 22 . 7/24/2012
Good final chapter. I thought Harry came accross an F-117 during his final flight. Harry had to say good-bye everyone prior to his final sunrise where Hermoine was waiting for him. Looking forward to future works of art.
| Lord Mayhem chapter 22 . 7/24/2012
LOL! Nice... Though I suggest using a calculator for 1997110 2107...
| Schnuff chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
so there is no other better person for Headmaster then Harry?
*What was needed was somebody who almost always thought things through, was fair minded, considered to be honourable, dependable*
When was the last (or better the first) time Harry thought things through?
He rushes into action without thinking.
Fair minded...if you don't belong to Slytherin House...one quarter of the school.
Honorable? What has he done now?
Dependable? Yes, sure...as long as it has nothing to do with homework or actually doing his best in classes.
With that characteristics one person jumps up...Hermione.
Sorry, but is this a humor/parody story?