Totally agree with erstwhile-S's comments. Enjoyed reading this story.

A fantastic premise, written so well. The characterisations were intriguing, as were the dynamics hinted at in the first chapter. Enjoyed reading this even if it’s incomplete. Thanks!

When will the next chapter be posted?

Such a good story. Too bad it’s discontinued

great story. I love the Dynamics of the groups. I think Henry is up to something sinister probably needing information and a partner to get on the third floor corridor.

I love it.

Though unfinished, this is a very worthwhile read! The author is terribly talented.

Excellent story! So much potential! I’m sad to see it not completed, but I’m still glad I got to read some of it. Thank you for sharing!

I really like the premise of this plot, something I think would’ve given this a lot more depth would’ve been if we didn’t get handed the black family lordship on a golden platter. Instead, if you played into the shrewd businessman angle it would’ve been much more interesting to see Harry struggle. It would also serve as a flip to Henry who has had everything handed to him. Just a thought, if anyone knows an HP fanfic like that please hmu I’d appreciate it!

Okay... Why is no one acknowledging the fact that your OC and Ron attacked Draco after Hermione intervention, taking advantage of the distraction she provided ?
Acting as if the OC and Ron were the innocent victims is downright stupid, just because Draco was the one to initiate the confrontation doesn't gave them a free pass to use violence, especially when they were trading insults with him moments before it.

Amo isso
Espero que um dia o autor volte e de continuidade a FanFiction, pois ela é incrível

is this abandoned?
Sad if so, I see much potential in the premise

Thanks for sharing! I really like how you wrote the main pair and Snape too. It's a refreshing take, and the little prologue at least lets us know that Harry and Hermione get together eventually, despite the parallels you tried to draw with James/Lily and Henry/Hermione. I wish you'd finished this, but I absolutely understand how a writer can come to leave a story when motivation runs dry.

It's a shame that it's abandones. A Great story, it is.

Oh so just because Harry has justified anger against James and certainly not helped by obnoxious Henry who immediately proclaims Harry evil. Harry is wrong? I m sorry but Harry is a normal human being whose hard life and facts being pushed in face will justly cause him to react! As if Hermione was any good herself! If she herself could not remain calm in face of simple taunt and provoking how the hell she can expect Harry to remain calm in face of obnoxiousness and his past. Bitch.