Reviews for Brothers In Arms
Mind Style chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Hello,

Thanks for posting this - I've just finished reading the first chapter.

It has a number of merits - the prose flows very nicely and events/scenes unfold logically at a pace that seems appropriate. Your descriptions are concise, and although sometimes they seem a little worn/clich├ęd, you have a good vocabulary and you implement words in the right context. Having said that, I found the writing style to be a bit bland; there is nothing wrong with it, but it isn't very engaging either. You tell a story well, but the character development or exploration wasn't compelling enough to encourage me to read the following chapters.
xxxXXXSMILEXXXxxx chapter 10 . 9/8/2012
Very intruiging and original I like the way this is heading and look foward to see what comes
HowlynMad chapter 4 . 7/16/2012
I'm thinking that these beings are not so loving as they have been portrayed. Could it be what Lucifer said? Or could it just be that heaven is not nearly as benign as we were led to believe...
HowlynMad chapter 3 . 7/16/2012
Hmm, the plot thickens.
HowlynMad chapter 2 . 7/16/2012
What an under-rated movie. The angel battle at the end was the highlight. I adore it when someone decides to pick the story. Let's see where you take it...
JadeObsession chapter 10 . 7/8/2012
oh nos!
Sharkolla chapter 10 . 6/28/2012
Wow, this is great. I came across this today and read it all in one sitting. I really enjoyed the plot of this and how well it seems to flow. You seem to have the characters being pretty well represented and not too OOC. I really enjoyed reading this and can't wait for the next update!
xPercyx chapter 10 . 6/20/2012
Very awesome chapter, Wonder Wat happens to Michael...Plz update as soon as possible :-)
Kermitty chapter 10 . 6/20/2012
Nooooooo... I don't want Michael to get hurt. He and Gabriel are so cute and so happy together. Great plottwist though.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Love,

Kermitty
The Stygian Angel chapter 10 . 6/19/2012
Thank you for updating:) Loved the chapter. Yayyyy! Gabriel and Michael got together:P Can't wait to read the next chapter (:o
The Stygian Angel chapter 9 . 5/18/2012
Plz update as soon as possible;)
Kermitty chapter 9 . 5/13/2012
Great update! I love Gabriel and Michael together, and your depiction of hell is interesting to say the least.

Love,

Kermitty
A Vulcan's Kiss chapter 9 . 5/7/2012
*puts head into pillow* . . . *screams happily* AHHHHHH! This is s-so brilliant! I've waited for this for forever it seems and oh my gosh! Gabriel loves him to! Seriously you are fabulous, why does this have so little reviews?1? I should like, make a billion accounts and review every chapter because thats what you deserve! Gah! Seriously people, give this awesome, fantastic, amazing, stupendous lady some reviews! Or I shall send Chuck Norris on you! MUAHAHAHHAHAHA! I really, really, really, so very much, love this chapter. One part that made me squeal (lol, funny word) in joy was when I read this part :

Slowly Gabriel leaned down kissing his brother softly on the lips as he spread his wings to wrap around them both. Michael moved closer to deepen the kiss, their tongues battling roughly for power over the other.

Gabriel felt everything around him melting away as he let his hands drop from Michaels shoulder to roam and caress his wondrous body. He couldn't believe the one thing he had longed for over the many millennia that made up his existence was now finally his. He found it even harder to believe his greatest fantasies were now within his grasp and he could freely show Michael the love he felt.

"I've always loved you." Gabriel managed to whisper against Michael's lips as he began to lead his lover back to his quarters.

Oh. My. Squirrel. WOW! That made me go into super fan-girl mode and bow down to my computer to bow to you, lol :) I'm not kidding. When they started kissing I was like "AWESOME!" and then when I got to the part where Gabriel gets overwhelmed because all of his deepest desires are now in his reach I was like "Wooot! Woot! Yes! Yes! Yes! ... will the rating ever go to M? Heeheehee, Haahaaahaaa! *crosses fingers*" Then when Gabriel says "I've always loved you." The bowing started :D This is amazing, my brain is in happy person overdrive. As I

ve probably stated before, words cannot do this story justice. No matter how may reviews you get, or how little reviews you get. You will, and always will be, the most stupendous writer on FanFiction. I am definitley your #1 Fan -atleast I hope I am . When I read your story it just makes my whole day, month and year. Thankyou so much for updating! I cannot thank you enough for updating AND writing this story! I would say I love you, as long as it doesn't freak you out :D :D :D :D Feel honored, because I always spend the most time I can giving you long and -hopefully- lovable reviews! I do this for no one else! You are special! I actually am grounded from my laptop and any other computers, but I snuck my way onto my little brothers so I could check to see if you updated. Once I saw you did, I had to review! Sorry I have to cut this short, my parents are on to me! *Runs and hides* (Sorry for all the exclamation points!)

Your #1 Fan,

80icrazy80
xPercyx chapter 9 . 5/7/2012
Awesome chapter:) Plz update as soon as possible;D
saichick-Anna-Erishkigal chapter 9 . 5/6/2012
Did the father KNOW Gabriel was in love with Michael when he banished him? Hmmm... What is this rivalry between the Father and Saolin? And who are these 5 heavenly beings?

Looking forward to the next chapter update!
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