|Reviews for the vampire ninja|
| Vampire editor24 chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
"So your the boy Seras turned"- Should be "you're" not "your"
"I don't know, go check on him if you are so worried." she said, -Should change the places of comma with the period or change the period to a comma "I don't know, go check on him if you are so worried," she said.
| daniel 29 chapter 3 . 6/17/2013
if they can find a suit of armor that fits naruto
| Hakkyou30 chapter 5 . 3/15/2013
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/23/2013
THAT LUCKY BASTARD
| FREUDY chapter 2 . 1/10/2013
ESTE FANFIC TIENE MUCHOS ERORE BA DEMASIADA RAPIDA Y NO CUENTA CON LAS PERSONALIDADE CORECTA PARA LO PERSONAJE
| acid.furry chapter 3 . 12/11/2012
I dont understand... You said turning a vampire marked them as your mate, and if you refused them they would try to get your afection or kill themselves. Why isint that happening with seras and Alucard? How is naruto using jutsu when hes dead? Why is Naruto and jiraiya so accepting of vampiers and being in a new world? Why is naruto so angsty?
| Shadowlocke Prime chapter 13 . 11/23/2012
Absolutely fucking awesome. This story rocks the house. I've rarely read a story so good. I want to read more chapters soon. Please keep writing this story, and I hope you never lose your muse or the will to write such awe inspiring stories.
| Ehlonna the demoness chapter 12 . 10/28/2012
i want much more please
| Ehlonna the demoness chapter 8 . 10/28/2012
fem Captain Hans
| Ehlonna the demoness chapter 5 . 10/28/2012
hana political alliance
| shadowfang jutsu chapter 13 . 9/22/2012
i look foreword to see what happens next i hope you decide to keep this fic going
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/12/2012
He dose not have to do it cuss he is. Not just a ninja now so they can't force him I no its a harem but still you make him soound like a bitch that can't fight his own fight
| Ehlonna the demoness chapter 13 . 8/24/2012
more please, Mr. Highking TOM!
| kingrobert84 chapter 13 . 8/19/2012
your doin great man whens update
| King zero chapter 13 . 8/3/2012
My name is king zero ! update plz I beg of you!