|Reviews for the vampire ninja|
| Crystal Vampire 678 chapter 2 . 4/20/2014
I don't know why but this is makin me laugh my head off ;D
| Domonic chapter 14 . 4/15/2014
Excellent work. an epic in the making this.
length can be disregarded if the story is told properly, and you seen to have done just that.
all in all, 12 out of 10, a scale breaker. Congradulations!
| Doctor Psychosis chapter 14 . 3/17/2014
hmm i shall look out for the completion of this promise. for this is a very good story my friend.
| Jose19 chapter 5 . 7/11/2013
I am giving you my choice for the second girl, and I give Yugito to Naruto because she is incredibly beautiful and sexy and very skilled as a Kunoichi so please mark this choice down.
| redwolf23456 chapter 14 . 7/3/2013
great story so far
| wildsavahnah chapter 14 . 6/23/2013
Okay first things first! This story is amazing! I however, don't understand why you would need to rewrite the whole thing when it's sooo good already. why?! And I can't wait for the next installment in this fantastic story!
nothing is true, everything is permitted!
Wildsavahnah signing off
| ArthurB chapter 2 . 6/19/2013
sickenly naive and melodramatic... no offense.
| NyaNyaKittyFace chapter 8 . 6/18/2013
Why if Naruto so weak?
| OBSERVER01 chapter 14 . 6/18/2013
| Vampire editor24 chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
"So your the boy Seras turned"- Should be "you're" not "your"
"I don't know, go check on him if you are so worried." she said, -Should change the places of comma with the period or change the period to a comma "I don't know, go check on him if you are so worried," she said.
| daniel 29 chapter 3 . 6/17/2013
if they can find a suit of armor that fits naruto
| Hakkyou30 chapter 5 . 3/15/2013
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/23/2013
THAT LUCKY BASTARD
| FREUDY chapter 2 . 1/10/2013
ESTE FANFIC TIENE MUCHOS ERORE BA DEMASIADA RAPIDA Y NO CUENTA CON LAS PERSONALIDADE CORECTA PARA LO PERSONAJE
| acid.furry chapter 3 . 12/11/2012
I dont understand... You said turning a vampire marked them as your mate, and if you refused them they would try to get your afection or kill themselves. Why isint that happening with seras and Alucard? How is naruto using jutsu when hes dead? Why is Naruto and jiraiya so accepting of vampiers and being in a new world? Why is naruto so angsty?