|Reviews for the vampire ninja|
| kingrobert84 chapter 13 . 8/19/2012
your doin great man whens update
| King zero chapter 13 . 8/3/2012
My name is king zero ! update plz I beg of you!
| Shadowprice chapter 13 . 7/19/2012
this is great make more and make seras live
| NeroSparda19 chapter 13 . 7/16/2012
this story is fantastic you should continue it as soon as possible
| RefleR chapter 5 . 7/15/2012
A fluffy romance with a mary sue Naruto crossover with Hellsing. Seriously shouldnt be mixed...
| gster391 chapter 2 . 6/5/2012
I just have one question. Since according to Naruto canon, they use chakra via a chakra circulatory system, why would it still be working when he's dead? Wouldn't stop, like the rest of his organs?
| jivablab chapter 2 . 5/6/2012
in hellsing sunlight isnt fatal to vampires it only weakens them they even had Seras walking around in sunlight before she had even drunk blood
| BookWyrm666 chapter 10 . 4/29/2012
It would have been funny to have the weding perfomed be Anderson.
Not that he'd do it, but it would be funny.
| ChronoMitsurugi chapter 3 . 4/27/2012
Wow, what a freaking wuss. This Naruto is acting like a little girl. *sigh* Sorry, the idea was intriguing, but this fic isn't for me.
Great pairing choice though. Would have been better if it was actually Naruto and Seras instead of these oc's.
| ChronoMitsurugi chapter 2 . 4/27/2012
It seems like you attempted their personalities, then gave up halfway through and went ooc on their asses. It is interesting but definitely not what I expected.
| gster391 chapter 3 . 4/23/2012
An interesting premise, but please work on your grammar...it's really irritating to read something with commas where periods should be and dialouge with no quotation.
| Ccebling chapter 13 . 4/12/2012
I hope Seras lives.
| The Prophet Of Lies chapter 12 . 4/4/2012
And your planning to give this man a 4th wife why? idk why people think people need more then 2 or 3 but its what ever
| The Prophet Of Lies chapter 8 . 4/4/2012
Not the best grammer in the world but i will say this i get a strong desire to evil laugh while reading this its so funny how his life is i been reading to many trying to be over pro that they dont make it fun to read
| The Prophet Of Lies chapter 5 . 4/4/2012
Funny ahahahha o a toast for me ] oooh i would rub it in their faces