|Reviews for the vampire ninja|
| The Prophet Of Lies chapter 2 . 4/4/2012
Longest decent cross over of this blend yet not as long as i tend to like but hey seems good so far only problem is either naruto changed when he was 'changed' or he got the hard on for this woman
| Alucard Wesker chapter 13 . 3/6/2012
kill off Seras and I will personally hunt you down. But on a lighter note Rip van would indeed make an interesting addition to Naruto's current harem
| OSR fanatic chapter 13 . 2/23/2012
Sad for Seras. :( *Sniff* Update Soon.
| Fierce Dities Link chapter 5 . 2/18/2012
I think Hinata should be the other girl he should mate with, Integra could dress her up as a maid and have her use her eyes for all kinds of missions, plus she wouuld be perfect with a gun! But if not her then Yugito would be my next choice. Or Fu, she's the seven tailed beauty
| Fallen-Ryu chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
well was going off to a good start...then i read the classic naruto turns into kyuubi thing...what people seem to not understand that while kyuubi is just a mass of chakra, thus has no true pyshical form of its own, it was basicly made by the rikudo to its shape seen in the manga/anime...also the fox parts are kinda overrated...
for the critisim i can give is that the chakra is basicly a massive of infinet power...and thus naruto wouldve had to be blown apart and his new form remade from the energy that would regather to remake him...kinda like what warhammer does with their deamons being made of completely out of warp energy/ thus unstable...but what the rikudo did stabilized the bijuu in their forms.
also thats just about it besides bringing humor in the story, while intresting it couldve been a bit more, and jiraya didnt handle the situation that well as he would've, consider this, your apprentice is somhow in another dimension that the toads only recently find out about since he summoned them and thus also giving them a binding to that realm...
(note:since the scroll erases the names of those that died because of their deaths, wouldnt naruto be erased from the scroll?plothole you need to fill in plz.)
thanks for reading this far if you havent selected the deletion button, im only saying this because the fox naruto thing is WAY overdone. ive read what? a hundred or so stories where he becomes kyuubi that way? its way to unoriginal...i wouldve tried to take a newer root by him becoming a chakra creature at frist...unable to remain stable for long periods of time untill he starts to use blood as a base for his form. thus giving him enough material to make a vampiric body. also due to their nature and closeness with bats his bijuu form couldve taken a more bat-like form...although about half as large as gumbanta since most of the chakra from kyuubi wouldve dirsbersed into the atmosphere due to the explosion (which wouldve taken out that hallway as well as since its being pureified chakra wouldve sent the world to start producing natural chakra...which would give big problems to people overtime as nature finds a way to fight back against industrial development and litterally send disaster after disaster with its own natural chakra. kinda-like a self defensive mechanisim that third rated or 2nd rated countires would find out.
anyway also he would have to take years to reabsorb the natural chakra to become a nine tailed being again...as well as take that time of hundreds or thousands of years (they dont say how old the bijuu are in naruto anyway) to completly control his power.
| Cat Eyes In The Night chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
| Sarah chapter 2 . 1/28/2012
Awesome chapter I mean seriously best stuff I've read in tears meet me in mcdonalds on 242 & 65 street so we can talk about your career
| BlazaWolf chapter 4 . 1/26/2012
the story is good so far, but your not putting in enough infomation, necessary information, misused puntuation, not using puntuation, spelling errors and not doing any variation of a scene break or even saying you're switching to another scene
| ebm6969 chapter 12 . 1/18/2012
Yes the I can taste the citrus from the lemon. Keep up the great work!
| Lednacek chapter 12 . 1/17/2012
the chapters are just too short.
| Lednacek chapter 10 . 1/17/2012
4 ppl marriage in a church? a vampire/demon in holy matrimony?
how did the millenium get into the elemental countries?
| Lednacek chapter 9 . 1/17/2012
i would appreciate more of naruto's abilities and skills. its better to know them before a fight. it gets less confusing.
| animeman12 chapter 12 . 1/16/2012
... hmm that was... unique
| animeman12 chapter 11 . 1/15/2012
... holy crap akatsuki and millenium joining forces... this will be awesome
| gamerman5603 chapter 11 . 1/5/2012
update soon please