Reviews for the vampire ninja
onslaught172 chapter 7 . 11/23/2011
? this is the first
ebm6969 chapter 7 . 11/22/2011
Awesome chapter. Love the cliffhanger I just hated that there had to be a cliffhanger.
ragnrock kyuubi chapter 6 . 11/22/2011
great story hope to read more chapters soon
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 6 . 11/18/2011
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
Vail Ryuketsu chapter 5 . 11/17/2011
Love the story. For the poll I say go with Hana
Radiant Demon chapter 5 . 11/15/2011
i think either yugito or hinata keeep up the good work
jprice410 chapter 5 . 11/15/2011
yugito as she is a jinchuuriki as well
Irishfighter chapter 5 . 11/15/2011
Great chapter, Hana Inuzuka
hanipman chapter 3 . 11/11/2011
Somehow...the spacing got better. But not the best. It is still hard to read, straining my eyes to constantly find my place.
Phibriglex chapter 3 . 11/11/2011
Great! you used some breaks in the story. Now the next step would be to use proper paragraphs and proper spacing between the paragraphs! (remember the rules for a new paragraph!)
Irishfighter chapter 2 . 11/10/2011
Awesome start
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