Reviews for The Outsider: The Lost Chapters
Kathrin Karverha chapter 4 . 8/2/2013
Very good job, you've got a great story happening here and your descriptions are also very good. Having read the whole Twokinds comic, I have to point out a small spelling error, it's Mana not manna. Apart from that, very good story, I'm going to go read your sequel now.
Kat.
Jaze84 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Very nice! Keep up the great work!
Jmrbob300 chapter 4 . 9/13/2012
Dammed bich... Causing you to stop writing... I know the feeling man... -Jmrbob
Rogue Paragon chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
hmm...interesting concept of keidran lifestyle. great job!