Reviews for Ember
Hellcleaner chapter 10 . 5/22/2012
nice story
Shellbell-San chapter 9 . 5/22/2012
Good, job, Minatu! It's a bit confusing, though. Try not to use so many pronouns, and use more detail, even on the dull parts. As your editor, I must say: WATCH OUT FOR YOUR GRAMMAR. Spelling counts,too, though.

Sincerely,

Shellbell-San

Editor of Asbel