Great story! It was an enjoyable ride, can't wait to read more from you!

Speechless! Read it all in one go, loved it! Well done

CUTEST STORY EVER 3

Quite enjoyed the story! Look forward to reading the next one!

Hi! your Story is very nice!
I was lucky I just-saw the first season.
The think i like the most: the first part without doubt. Untill the rave party, they are looking for each other, chasing each other. It's a cat's and dogs play, and it's thrilling! I loved the way you described stiles feelings, especially about his loneliness. So relevent, so real, so well used too. You draw parallel between him and Derek and it's excellent!
The think i liked less: Maybe the after coming out. Let me explain myself: The begining is so intense that when they are finally together, it's kind of,..disappointing. Also, the characters are at that moment, a bit Out of character. But i agree it's kinda normal since the relation is, itself, out of character.

What's more: congratulations for your amazing writing, especially for the humor present in very chapter. You mad me laugh so uch!

Thank you for this moment,

Zafyra

I love your style of writing! You almost brought me to tears at the end of chapter eight...

Loved the story :)

It was real good.

Ohh! Loved it!

Such a great story, I really enjoyed it!

totaly awesome fic dude...and stiles' mental break down made me cry...all in all i look foward tto more of you awesome work

Feeeeeels! :)

Just.. wow..

*fans self*

HOLY SHIT, what the hell just happened?!