Reviews for On Normandy's Wings
Wgreen chapter 6 . 3/16/2012
Pretty good Raven. However i do agree to a level with one of the other reviews. Shepard has always been an open character. But i respect your choice all the same. It's a great read. Hope you continue.

Cool Ninja face...

Liege Lord chapter 6 . 2/28/2012
Nice, are you sure Grunt doesn't have the genophage though?
Liege Lord chapter 5 . 1/26/2012
Ah, interesting that there was more than one person that sold 'em out.

Council meeting as well huh? Well, I suppose the only good thing about the Council will be the massive 'I told you so.' speech you need to be able to give them when the Reapers arrive.
Late Mr.Fry chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
well I'm all for stories that don't start with the SI saving tali and joining shepard so yeah, I give this one a chance.
Aderran chapter 4 . 1/25/2012
Nice. It's a good story, though he doesn't seem to remember his life before ME.
Doom Marine 54 chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Why did you feel the need to put an oc here? Nothing about shepard is defined he's an open ended character, having an oc is pointless.
Liege Lord chapter 4 . 12/8/2011
If this is an SI how come you have to assume it was Chakwas? Surely you would know what she looks like and you'd already know about the mission and Sidonis etc even if you don't state it out loud?

Anyway, nice chapter, popping to Ilium a bit early huh?
Liege Lord chapter 3 . 11/24/2011
Very good, hmm, so more than just Garrus survived, excellent. Who other than Garrus is going to join the crew though I wonder.
Liege Lord chapter 2 . 11/15/2011
Hmm, gonna get recruited at the same time as Garrus maybe then. Still sounds like you won't be able to stop the betrayal either, wonder if that'll mean he and Garrus share a loyalty mission.

Noticed you changed a few names of the squad members from canon as well, interested to see what happens to them. Didn't realise how early the plague had come along either. Very nice work. :)
Liege Lord chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
Of to an interesting start, interested to see how you'll continue. :)

dakk55 chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
Interesting, a bounty hunter, eh? Wonder how you'll get him on Shepard's crew? Maybe have him hide out on Freedom's Progress or look up Mordin?