Reviews for One Chance
Jj chapter 18 . 4/9/2017
Danny's lost his shit
Crystalzap chapter 23 . 3/17/2017
The weird clothes and piercing are one thing (teenage rebellion/depression) But Danny SHOOTING anyone, even Vlad is WAY ooc and whole nother level of mental instability. That fact that he could do that with no consequences is even worse. If Vlad was anyone else he would probably be dead.
AzazelLuciferDeathCrowley chapter 8 . 5/16/2016
lolaba chapter 27 . 12/20/2014
I really hope you continue this! It is so well written!
darkxchocolate94 chapter 27 . 1/28/2014
I can't wait for the next update. It seems like these two are slowly losing their minds. They're turning into shells of their former selves. I want to see how this turns out.
Guest chapter 25 . 1/28/2014
Vlad has lost it. :(
P.A.W.07 chapter 27 . 12/19/2013
I finally got back to this story ... like a year later and they are still in Amity Park. XD

Anyway, despite the lack of plot movement, I still like this. Vlad's character never ceases to be interesting and I just love Danny's inner battle to not become Dan. And all that angst.

Wonderful work.
PoeticSnowflake chapter 27 . 12/1/2013
i cant imagine how long this story will be at this pace, hope the rest is as good as it has been so far.
Ameafurry chapter 27 . 12/1/2013
This story is creepy awesome! I just read all 27 chapters in a day and a night. You other story that you just started about Danny found to Vlad's place is really good too! Keep going!
Hiway202 chapter 26 . 9/22/2013
To late. I'm already sick.

Update soon!
Alyss Penedo chapter 21 . 8/8/2013
*violently facepalms*
*backhands Vlad across the room for good measure*
Just because he can't go ghost doesn't make him helpless! Why couldn't Vlad have, oh, I don't know, PHASED THROUGH THE BULLETS like the seasoned fighter he's supposed to be instead of sitting there like a complete douchebag?
Punkflame chapter 26 . 5/5/2013
omg you HAVE to wrtie more!
Flying Dragonite chapter 13 . 3/10/2013
wow danny has a MOUTH. never saw that in the cartoons. x pokes author x then again, he is a teenage boy who just lost everything near and dear to him and he's deathly frightened of turning into an evil freak. I guess I would be cursing too.
ChopSuzi chapter 26 . 1/5/2013
I'm getting really creeped out now. It just goes to show how well you can illustrate Vlad's desperate insanity.

Also, thank you for that wonderful mental image of your sickly state. I can easily say that yes, you are very, very sick and should take a vacation from us for a while so you can get better. :)
jeanette9a chapter 26 . 11/25/2012
i hope you get well soon!
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