Reviews for The Remedy for Malice
Grounded4lifenomore chapter 17 . 5/28/2012
Amazing! I am at the edge of my seat right now wondering what's going to happen between Peter and Tink and when he will find Danny and Jane:) Awesome chapter and I really, really hope you update soon!:D
itisfinished12062015 chapter 17 . 5/9/2012
Wow interesting plot twist.
GinnyWhetherby chapter 17 . 5/9/2012
Great chapter! So much detail. Update soon, kind author!
Indigomyst00 chapter 17 . 5/9/2012
So awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Grounded4lifenomore chapter 16 . 4/28/2012
Peter! Ahh, finally!:D

Gosh I was cringing during the Jane and Hook part, hoping that she would find some way to escape, but I'm glad Peter came just in time. I must say that I admire how brave Jane is in this chap and how, even though she is scared out of her wits, she stands her ground and doesn't give Hook the satisfaction. I also like how she puts her brother before herself so well done on that:) Amazing job and I hope you update soon!:D
FrenchFryKHS chapter 16 . 4/28/2012
omgomgomgomgomgomg Peter's coming!:O Can't wait to read more! 8'D
itisfinished12062015 chapter 16 . 4/19/2012
The emotion in the last sentence was great. Keep writing.
Indigomyst00 chapter 16 . 4/18/2012
Wow! So good. I hate cliff hangers. Lol. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Grounded4lifenomore chapter 15 . 4/17/2012
You go Jane! Yeah, just what that codfish deserves!

Okay now that I got that over with, I have to say that even though I am quite satisfied with what she did, I am a little scared of what Hook's reaction might be...

Oh and poor little Johnny,

"I don't like this adventure Jane, I want to go home."

Gosh that made my heart break:( Hopefully Peter gets there soon.

Fantastic job on this chapter and I liked how you explained Hook's feelings during Jane and Johnny's little moment. Even though I still think he's a stinky old codfish, I kinda pity him a little:P Anyways great job and I can't wait for the next one!:D
Indigomyst00 chapter 15 . 4/11/2012
I just read the whole story for the first time today. It's really good. I like that she punched Hook. Can't wait for the next chapter!
itisfinished12062015 chapter 15 . 4/10/2012
Wow very dramatic but great ending.
PirateWizardThief chapter 15 . 4/10/2012
Yeah, she punched Hook! That was epic! Can't wait to read more! Wonder what will happen when Peter gets there! I love this story! keep up with the good work!
Grounded4lifenomore chapter 14 . 4/4/2012
Oh my gosh! He kidnapped her! Gasp! I know it's a short review and I apologize but I'm just speechless right now:P I hope you update soon because I'm dieing to know what happens next! Great job and I really can't wait for the next one:D
itisfinished12062015 chapter 14 . 3/24/2012
Wow now that was a twist.
Grounded4lifenomore chapter 13 . 3/1/2012
Wow...That was a pretty epic cliffhanger...


I can't wait to see what Hook plans on doing now.

"Were you fun once, Uncle?" Johnny and John always tend to make me laughXD But John in this chapter made me feel bad for him. And also Peter and Jane. I hope they make up soon. Awesome chapter, I loved it and I can't wait for the next one:D
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