|Reviews for her dreams then, her reality now|
| Sarya33 chapter 1 . 5/8
Really, you're amazing. Such a great fanfic. I almost cried.. I totally agree with you, Inheritance depressed me as well ;-; but that and the other fanfic you wrote, cheered me up, u cute 3 thank you so much -
| miiyghyu chapter 1 . 4/7/2016
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2016
Damn STRAIGHT! CHRIS, WRITE A MUCH BETTER SEQUEL
| humikuri chapter 1 . 9/7/2014
firstly, yes i just finished inheritance (like five minutes ago). and yes, it depressed me. Don't get me wrong though, i love the series and the book! it's amazing! But yes, like you i do not find the cliff-hanger nasmurtagh romance, i wanted them to get together so bad! i swear i fell in love with teh two more so than eragon and arya!
their's is such a bittersweet love story...
So thank you, for writing this short and sweet and absoloutely heart-warming piece! as much as i know it's not cannon and won't be. It's still great to imagine as their future!
Thanks! lots of love! :)
| Laa98 chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
I just finished Inheritance myself, and was equally with this beautiful love story ending up to...nothing.
So thank you for offering the two of them the happy life they deserve! :-D
| FandaticForeverAndAlways chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
I finished Inheritance today, and really have been depressed since. Of course Nasuada/Murtagh ending never pleased me. And I'm pretty sure they will meet again. It's evil to not have them to. But, thank you for this! I needed some Murtagh and Nasuada love. This was really a great read, and I loved to see them in love. Thank you. :)
| InkWeaverabc chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Best way to go with that ending, in my opinion. Completely ignore it and re-wrote how you will xD and this was vey enjoyable to read.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
Awesome! This really cheered me up after having just finished :(
| Kay chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
I jumped on the Inheritance bandwagon not long ago ( I know- I waited too long!) and I agree that these need two some kind of ending! It just...stopped! It drove me insane!
| CitrusyGoddess chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
I'm accepting this little beauty as canon as the book seriously depressed me to :L
| missylynn99 chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
YES! Inheritance was just bloody depressing! How could he do that to us?! Just raise the sails of the Nasuada/Murtagh ship to then practically sink it? Nope, not to me anyways. Something along these lines is canon in my mind.
| Annie Wants all the Books chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
This is awesome. Just what I needed. Inheritance depressed me too so THANKS!
| Virodeil chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
I like this. I agree with you, in CP's world it most likely is improbably, for the same reasons you told us. But it cheered me up immensely anyway, and it was quite well-written too. Only that, where were the wineglasses they were carrying when Murtagh began to tease Nasuada? *grin* LOL I think you forgot that when you said "his thumbs"... Where did Murtagh put his and Nasuada's before he began to entise her?
And about the ... huh ... sexing? (I never heard of that word used like that! But probably it's just my ignorance born of the fact that I am a foreign speaker of english.) You did it right anyway. I loved it. You built the atmosphere quite well. And your reasoning made sense too, and I agree with you there. 4 kids in 8 years... and if seen from your version of the timeline where they had been married for just 5 years, then it's 1 kid per year! LOL That's just ... Heheheheheh. That actually tickled me.
Overall, well done! Thank you very, very much for sharing this little snippet with us all. (And yes, Book 4 depressed me as well...)
| Valerie Grimm chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
I love this. Is cannon I know
| ILoveFanfictions chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
I wish Paolinin wrote something as optmistic as your fanfiction. Murtagh and Nasuadas ending was so... it didn't iven feel like an ending :P
Thanks for writing it :)