|Reviews for Falling Apart|
| Dawn over a Lilly chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Yoush! Your awesomeness level went up by 6!
| kairi8912 chapter 13 . 4/26/2012
i wanna know what happens and it was great i love the story
| Immortal Sina chapter 13 . 3/17/2012
Hmm this is interesting. A couple things I would suggest, though. 1.) Maybe you want to look your chapters over before you update them? Some chapters, some parts, seem to be a bit rocky and hard to understand. Plus, there is grammar and spelling mistakes. Just a suggestion to make your writing better. And 2.) [This is just an opinion] Could you make your chapters a bit longer? I'm not saying, like, 5ooo words or anything; maybe around the 15oo or 25oo mark? Thanks.
And, of course, keep it up! :D
| Uqluiorra12345 chapter 13 . 3/16/2012
Sorry I retract that one statement.
Writing less, doing math more. O_O" i got a final grade of 59%
ANYWAY! I'll still write as much as I can. I promise.
| HawkRider chapter 4 . 11/14/2011
You have quite a talent. And this is a hilarious chapter. And Axel's still being strange!
The only complaint I have so far is that the chapters are a little short, but then again, considering when you are writing this...
| HawkRider chapter 3 . 11/14/2011
Ooh, some funny moments in this chapter. Ah, and Axel's becoming a stalker! YAY!
And yay for 'Raven's Gate' as well.
And strange Mar and Xem in this too. That's good.
Clever idea with the notes. I may end up doing that.
| HawkRider chapter 2 . 11/14/2011
This is an interesting way of writing, to say the least. It is still really good. As is the story.
| HawkRider chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Oof. That's a powerful start. You've already got me hooked.
Yeah, I decided you should have some more reviews for this story, so I'm going to review every chapter.
| kairi8912 chapter 4 . 11/11/2011
this is so good plez update