Reviews for Nc17
Guest chapter 7 . 10/20/2016
i reaaly am just going to say this, this is poorly written, innaprpriate, vile and writing this makes you a creep.
Jml chapter 8 . 8/9/2016
Your grammar/spelling is horrible. The story was good but then you started you words that sound smimliar but have a different meaning which just makes this story horrible. You should either correct you mistakes and pay more attention to what you write or just stop writing.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/4/2016
Its Ginevra.
Guest chapter 8 . 11/7/2015
Anonymous chapter 8 . 10/9/2015
Wait,that's it?
Sg1robinson chapter 8 . 9/13/2015
Please finish this story. I want to know what happens to Hermione, Fred and George!
Guest chapter 8 . 6/29/2015
So is this story gona continue?
I really live it and I thinks its really profound tbh
Sad chapter 8 . 1/13/2015
crying bc it was never finished
anonymous chapter 8 . 1/5/2015
i love it a lot 3 i really want to read the rest of this story. :) you're an extremely good writer!
charles chapter 8 . 11/18/2014
What is that it? I hope theres more.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/21/2014
10th sentence from the bottom: His pale grey hardened...I believe you're missing a word there :)
anonymous chapter 6 . 4/10/2014
this story is the worst thing i have ever read please don't write any more, you're just hurting people's eyes
LOL 3000 chapter 8 . 1/3/2014
amazing i love it! nobody could think of that your great just one problem WHERE'S CHAPTER 9!
Pink Wytch chapter 8 . 11/21/2013
PLEASE update this story. I would love to see more of it. I love how you make it mature but still have a story involved with it.
RoughIslandSunrise chapter 8 . 9/4/2013
Cant wait for the update
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