|Reviews for Nc17|
| Jml chapter 8 . 8/9
Your grammar/spelling is horrible. The story was good but then you started you words that sound smimliar but have a different meaning which just makes this story horrible. You should either correct you mistakes and pay more attention to what you write or just stop writing.
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/4
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/7/2015
| Anonymous chapter 8 . 10/9/2015
| Sg1robinson chapter 8 . 9/13/2015
Please finish this story. I want to know what happens to Hermione, Fred and George!
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/29/2015
So is this story gona continue?
I really live it and I thinks its really profound tbh
| Sad chapter 8 . 1/13/2015
crying bc it was never finished
| anonymous chapter 8 . 1/5/2015
i love it a lot 3 i really want to read the rest of this story. :) you're an extremely good writer!
| charles chapter 8 . 11/18/2014
What is that it? I hope theres more.
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/21/2014
10th sentence from the bottom: His pale grey hardened...I believe you're missing a word there :)
| anonymous chapter 6 . 4/10/2014
this story is the worst thing i have ever read please don't write any more, you're just hurting people's eyes
| LOL 3000 chapter 8 . 1/3/2014
amazing i love it! nobody could think of that your great just one problem WHERE'S CHAPTER 9!
| Pink Wytch chapter 8 . 11/21/2013
PLEASE update this story. I would love to see more of it. I love how you make it mature but still have a story involved with it.
| RoughIslandSunrise chapter 8 . 9/4/2013
Cant wait for the update
| Fred4lifegurl chapter 8 . 8/23/2013
Hi I love this story! CAN U PLEASE UPDATE?!