Reviews for Bubbling Over
eyeon chapter 2 . 3/14/2020
Oh I think a forced marriage fic would be amazing written by the 2 of you. Although who knows where you are off to now? Mayne the movie brought you back? This chapter was fantastic
honestly-can't-think-of-one chapter 2 . 2/7/2015
THIS WAS EPIC! How do you write such scenes? It just left me wanting for more... Matthew and Mary are so perfect... This just made them more perfect;) Please, more stories like this! I take my hats off to you!
Guest chapter 2 . 9/12/2013
I reread this a couple of times, here's how I think ends. Matthew storms into the room & tells Robert " Mary & I will decide when we get married, & no one else! & storms out. Robert starts to scream back at him, but is stop by violet. Who along with Cora had entered the room while they were gone. Robert turns to them & says " I'm her father I have every right to force them to marry, after their behavior. " Violet states " But you did not listen to the boy, he said when they marry. If you try & force them they'll fight you all the way, give them time to talk about it. I think you will like their decision." " But mama_. " " No but mama, this will happen. I'd be more worried about how'll keep them apart, until we can get them to the alter. " As Cora silently pondered will Mary tell him her secert, & will that ruin everything...
Rae Smith Cobleigh chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
Damn damn damn wow
Blonde-Existentialist chapter 2 . 6/10/2012
I love what y'all have done wth these! The first scene deliciously anger fueled and sexy, and the second a wonderful coda to the situation!
Ultrahotpink chapter 2 . 12/6/2011
Wasn't expecting another chapter of this. Loved it!
Applicious chapter 2 . 12/5/2011
Wow... this story took my breath away! Loved both chapters!
TrapperII chapter 2 . 12/4/2011
Goodness, I can't believe I didn't notice that you had posted another chapter to this! You know, I think you could write an entire series of M/M-arguing-and-then-making-out fics, and I would never get sick of them. It works so well for these two. :)

I'm very much looking forward to the new, epic sequel ...
Ju-dou chapter 2 . 12/4/2011
ARGH! Too much wonderfulness! Rain kissing is a welcome addition to any fic and when written by you two it is sublime. There has been no greater double act since Mary and Matthew themselves. I am unreasonably excited by the prospect of your next venture, 50,000 words! You immense teases. Please post a tantalising taster immediately. Gah. Perfection.
gayeffie chapter 2 . 12/4/2011

You two... *shakes fist* I LOVE you two...

and at that teaser for your new story, I must admit has me wanting it...


can't wait for it and I loved this one... think half my brain cells exploded :D in a good way, from the kisses...

sorry, now I'm giggling madly...

x kissthespider26
URMYSTICK chapter 2 . 12/4/2011
3 weeks and counting..this kind of fanfic is the only kind i want to read. Loved every word. The chemistry is palpable and very apt following the recently published steaming hot Evening Standard photo's! with the christmas Special in sight, let's keep it smutty- done with 1919 pleasantries, bring on the amimal magnetism ;)
thatonekimgirl chapter 2 . 12/3/2011
THIS IS SO GOOD OMG. (And I can't wait for the other sequel!)
GhostIsland chapter 2 . 12/3/2011
Sigh...what a wonderful (wet, hot) nostalgic trip...this M/M are just charming (even while bickering and bantering) - especially in both of your capable hands. :D You set such a mood here, with the rain and how it sort of contributes to their loss of inhibitions around each other. The fighting is hot (hate flirting with a touch of deeper feelings, LOVE!) and the making out in the rain? HOTTER. ;) The...removal of the water on the cheek, the hands in the hair, the thin clothing...AMAZING. :) And how they come to a sort of understanding at the end...perfect. :D I loved this AU back then, and I love it just as much now. :) What a treat! :D You guys are wonderful - keep RPing! :)
TNMMRR chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
I can't quite find the words to review this fine piece of fanfic. Probably the most lovely thing I have ever come across. Good god...Thank you. Just lovely. Lovely. It actually caused a physical pain in my chest...I'm sorry I'm getting a bit carried away here. I just can't describe how much I loved this.
Tripp3235 chapter 2 . 12/3/2011
If you two ever want to team up and simply write a string of scenes with Mary and Matthew kissing over and over again, I would read it OVER AND OVER AGAIN.

And I still am overloaded with S2 to read as much FF as I should (so many writers out there which includes you two) but I love the S1 stuff.

Oh and the rain. Mary and Matthew should kiss more in the rain!

Sigh. That is all. I may have better formulated sentences later.
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