Reviews for Finally
MillieD chapter 15 . 11/12/2011
say what? LOL maybe she does want him.
MillieD chapter 14 . 11/12/2011
something else he can obsess over when she leaves lol
loulou193 chapter 25 . 11/12/2011
I get to decide what happens? Wow! That is so awesome! Maybe I want both to happen?
BlueEyeBrat chapter 25 . 11/12/2011
Ok so usually I review after every chapter, but this time I couldn't stop! So sorry! I started this late cause Cara owned my brain this morning & then I had to give my family love. So when I picked it up I couldn't stop. LOL I kept waiting for a reveal :) So good! I don't know how you did that in 100 words! It's amazing!
shellshock81 chapter 19 . 11/12/2011
That ones a little creepy. Just cuz you know I think of my fil and gross. But if my fil looked like edward...
shellshock81 chapter 18 . 11/12/2011
Oh yes...
shellshock81 chapter 17 . 11/12/2011
Spouse...clever clever.
shellshock81 chapter 16 . 11/12/2011
I love the last line.
shellshock81 chapter 15 . 11/12/2011
shellshock81 chapter 14 . 11/12/2011
You are just do clever. Did you decide from the beginning you would split out up?
shellshock81 chapter 11 . 11/12/2011
That's sweet.
shellshock81 chapter 9 . 11/12/2011
This makes me so sad. My hubs and I slept apart for two years bc our son wouldn't sleep alone and sucked. It can really hurt your marriage without you realizing it.

Anyway..I know that's not their problem but it reminded me.
MillieD chapter 13 . 11/12/2011
Feel bad for him.
shellshock81 chapter 7 . 11/12/2011
I'm trying to read this as esme pov bc of assumed edward the first time... It's difficult. The writing sounds masculine but I funk it's just bc that's how I originally read it.

But it's do good the way you created this mystery. I love it.
shellshock81 chapter 5 . 11/12/2011
doesn't sound there is much goodness and grace in him either...
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