Reviews for The Wild One
Bella chapter 1 . 9/23
Love it wish there was more
Jessica Lahote Black chapter 1 . 10/9/2016
Awwwwww its so good...please tell me that wasnt it
rrochelle465 chapter 1 . 1/16/2016
Wow what a chapter...,Wow Jake took to his wolf very quickly I would not be surprised if he took his rightful position in the pack poor Paul he he really messed up...I hope he learned something from the experience...great story good job...
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2016
That was adorable, kudos
1WhoLoves2ReadAlot chapter 1 . 12/13/2015
Great story, so far! Love it!
sampam69 chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
Oh that was sweet :-) But Paul is still my main man ;-)
WisdoMonroe chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
I love your writing. I think you took this challenge and did a great job at it.
Paul lived up his reputation. Jake played his role. After I got over the pairing, it took me a while to figure out why I just didn't like Jake in this story. And then it ind of dawned on me, Jake kind of decided that he was going to do what he thought was right and use his position and power to affect Bella's life. It reminded me of Edward.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
Good story.
alh1971 chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
Brilliant...
SarahanjoMiller chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
So good thanks! I love the oneshots . I normally don't like one shots but I've been reading yours from the most recent down and I really AM enjoying them.
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
I love this! Yes, I love Paul too but this was engaging and hopeful and Jake felt right. Paul wasn't ready for Bella, Jake is the right guy for her.
N321 chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Paul deserved that broken leg.
lauritalaloca13 chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Continue it! :D 3
Oridara chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
What a challenge and you took it like a soldier! The ending makes me think perhaps Bella is pregnant and doesn't really have the stomach flu... that would be crazy. I loved this new situation...my favorites: the gentle one, the wild one, and the thick one. Opps, Jared's not here, lol!
radix chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
to bad no imprint... wonderful story
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