|Reviews for What if?|
| Bloodina The Twilight chapter 12 . 10/12
| Sexy Fox Girl chapter 1 . 9/5
youre story sounds interesting i will have to read it later t
| AnimeLover72636 chapter 5 . 6/18
This story is too unrealistic. Hake controls ice, and Gaara could easily just crush them. Hinata had at least a little knowledge of Gentle Fist. Baki has strong wind attacks for dang sake. Itachi was either a jonin or ANBU and has skills far greater than 4 kids who- in your story- can't fight back. The Leaf Village has WAY more than just 30 ninjas, and they have Inuzukas. They were trained to track people. Itachi knew about Baki's mission, how could he have not? How did the kids just get more clothes out of nowhere? They didn't have money. What does sense of direction have to do with knowing which way to go? How could Hinata yell if she can't even talk without stuttering? I could name a lot more but I won't. Your plot is interesting but your actual writing and knowledge on this anime makes this story horrible. Sorry if I degraded you or made you feel bad, just take this as constructive criticism okay? Thanks for reading this if you did.
| AnimeLover72636 chapter 4 . 6/18
There's a lot of plot holes. The trip to Suna is 3 days with ninjas going their quickest speed.
| my 2 guys chapter 1 . 3/31
that was good keep the chapters coming
| thebestoftherest chapter 19 . 2/2
God story eve though they now have enough people to start their own village.
| guest chapter 37 . 10/9/2015
Damn it other story that has a f***in sequal n not a surprise it not complete. Other SOB that decides to sequal it like many othet naruto fic on here. Just put naruto n shippudin together. I away have to go to the last chapter n pray in my head for no sequal or hope for a complete one but nope.
| Guest chapter 37 . 9/8/2015
Make for chapters it's been 2 years
| Joe R chapter 16 . 9/2/2015
She was in her late twenties in Shippuden.
| Luna-Uzumaki-Hyuga chapter 13 . 6/10/2015
| Luna-Uzumaki-Hyuga chapter 12 . 6/10/2015
y R si
| DayDrmrNiteWlkr chapter 35 . 12/6/2014
WHERE THE FUCK IS MY SEQUEL?! 17 MONTHS! DIS SOME OLE BULL! DIS WAS AN AWESOME NARUHINA FANFIC AND I WANT MY DAMN SEQUEL! GIMME MAH DAMN SEQUEL! GIMME, GIMME, GIMME, GIMME!
| kotaa chapter 34 . 7/12/2014
i know iits late but i choose sai
| kota chapter 18 . 7/12/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2014