Reviews for What if?
Halokidjw2 chapter 2 . 5/9
Haku Haku haku haku!
alanaliu chapter 12 . 4/16
A
blueshark12 chapter 1 . 3/5
animelover72636 dude it is a story... I don't understand why Fanfic has to follow canon... what is the point of writing fanfic if you are just going to follow canon? especially when the story doesn't have anything in common with canon anyways... lolv
Guest chapter 9 . 1/8
when the guop had be buit up then the 4 hd cavvan as a failmy and find mornly in the vallge and gold and sliver too some food and art too books of all trlys too and then buit a ship the goup buit up and sail on to he whiopool to live in
RosettaxBloody chapter 12 . 10/12/2016
YES DEIDARA!
Sexy Fox Girl chapter 1 . 9/5/2016
youre story sounds interesting i will have to read it later t
AnimeLover72636 chapter 5 . 6/18/2016
This story is too unrealistic. Hake controls ice, and Gaara could easily just crush them. Hinata had at least a little knowledge of Gentle Fist. Baki has strong wind attacks for dang sake. Itachi was either a jonin or ANBU and has skills far greater than 4 kids who- in your story- can't fight back. The Leaf Village has WAY more than just 30 ninjas, and they have Inuzukas. They were trained to track people. Itachi knew about Baki's mission, how could he have not? How did the kids just get more clothes out of nowhere? They didn't have money. What does sense of direction have to do with knowing which way to go? How could Hinata yell if she can't even talk without stuttering? I could name a lot more but I won't. Your plot is interesting but your actual writing and knowledge on this anime makes this story horrible. Sorry if I degraded you or made you feel bad, just take this as constructive criticism okay? Thanks for reading this if you did.
AnimeLover72636 chapter 4 . 6/18/2016
There's a lot of plot holes. The trip to Suna is 3 days with ninjas going their quickest speed.
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 3/31/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
thebestoftherest chapter 19 . 2/2/2016
God story eve though they now have enough people to start their own village.
guest chapter 37 . 10/9/2015
Damn it other story that has a f***in sequal n not a surprise it not complete. Other SOB that decides to sequal it like many othet naruto fic on here. Just put naruto n shippudin together. I away have to go to the last chapter n pray in my head for no sequal or hope for a complete one but nope.
Guest chapter 37 . 9/8/2015
Make for chapters it's been 2 years
Joe R chapter 16 . 9/2/2015
She was in her late twenties in Shippuden.
Luna-Uzumaki-Hyuga chapter 13 . 6/10/2015
A
Luna-Uzumaki-Hyuga chapter 12 . 6/10/2015
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