Reviews for What if?
NaruHina-InuKag-Jelsa chapter 13 . 6/10
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NaruHina-InuKag-Jelsa chapter 12 . 6/10
no
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DayDrmrNiteWlkr chapter 35 . 12/6/2014
WHERE THE FUCK IS MY SEQUEL?! 17 MONTHS! DIS SOME OLE BULL! DIS WAS AN AWESOME NARUHINA FANFIC AND I WANT MY DAMN SEQUEL! GIMME MAH DAMN SEQUEL! GIMME, GIMME, GIMME, GIMME!
kotaa chapter 34 . 7/12/2014
i know iits late but i choose sai
kota chapter 18 . 7/12/2014
coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
Buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuulllllllllllllllllshit
Guest chapter 13 . 6/15/2014
I would not choose either but between then easily fuu although there is more background information on guren
Guest chapter 12 . 6/15/2014
another girl would be good and diedara should be a friend jiraiya would be cool
Guest chapter 5 . 6/14/2014
i like it but you made itachi look like a fool getting bitten and hit there and baki look weak but it was wonderfull i love it
Guest chapter 35 . 3/26/2014
YOU MUST UPDATE!0_0
kat12 chapter 37 . 3/22/2014
Uh I think I'm going to faint. Anyway ur a awesome writer\ author.
SageModeSasuke chapter 12 . 2/4/2014
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Monki-Neko chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
i like this bare bones of this whole thing but i really think you need to revise this, and not just the grammar (especially the lack of punctuation) either but the dialog b/w the kids; i can understand hinata speaking just that little bit more refined than other kids her age as the heiress of the hyuuga clan, but even so, she and naruto both should be speaking simpler. i also feel like your balance is off, the amount of dialog versus the narrative is tipped way more to the former than the latter.
Void chapter 12 . 12/4/2013
Yay Dei-chan! *Does a little happy dance*
Void chapter 4 . 12/4/2013
Kisame or Zabuza
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