Reviews for Good Deal
HeyHedy chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Heard this was the story to check out via twitter & they weren't lying! I don't love the cheating part, but I'm just gonna ignore that! :)

Can't wait for more!

sheviking chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Lol, awesome! Here's hoping Rosalie does something really evil soon! :)
teambellaedward chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
JasperLuver48 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
that was hot! I can't wait til she pisses Bella off again... need to see these two together again! (and I rarely read E/B but this is very intriguing!)
JasperLuver48 chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
Hot damn, that was awesome! I think I'm gonna like this!
Petitharpy chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Aaaaaand I'm hooked. This is starting out so fun & I love your descriptions. I can totally picture it all *ahem* going down.
Ivygirl702 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
This is going to be a lot of fun. I'm super hooked already. Love that Bella is the one who's doing the chasing, that she's a strong girl.

Favorite line: "You should be proud of that ass."
Ivygirl702 chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
Oh God. This is perfection right here. I adore that this is the way that they met.
Ivygirl702 chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
Ooh, quick and dirty. Sounds promising. ;)

Thanks for the great start!
babylopez2008 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
I loved the banter.

Do you have the story pre-written or are you writing as you go?

Can't wait for more :)
diehardtwilightfan23 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Oh my gosh! I haven't read fanfiction in forever and not very many good ones either! I love the way this has begun, and I really hope it continues in the same way! Hope the next chapter comes soon(no pun intended)
ze1uh chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
haha! love her!
babylopez2008 chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
Lol, Edward. Well dang. If he dislikes his girlfriend that much, why is he with her?
babylopez2008 chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
Omg... lol I'm nervous for drama and girl fighting.
Jaws28 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
loved the chapter, can't wait for the next one
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