Reviews for Good Deal
Petitharpy chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Aaaaaand I'm hooked. This is starting out so fun & I love your descriptions. I can totally picture it all *ahem* going down.
Ivygirl702 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
This is going to be a lot of fun. I'm super hooked already. Love that Bella is the one who's doing the chasing, that she's a strong girl.

Favorite line: "You should be proud of that ass."
Ivygirl702 chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
Oh God. This is perfection right here. I adore that this is the way that they met.
Ivygirl702 chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
Ooh, quick and dirty. Sounds promising. ;)

Thanks for the great start!
babylopez2008 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
I loved the banter.

Do you have the story pre-written or are you writing as you go?

Can't wait for more :)
diehardtwilightfan23 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Oh my gosh! I haven't read fanfiction in forever and not very many good ones either! I love the way this has begun, and I really hope it continues in the same way! Hope the next chapter comes soon(no pun intended)
ze1uh chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
haha! love her!
babylopez2008 chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
Lol, Edward. Well dang. If he dislikes his girlfriend that much, why is he with her?
babylopez2008 chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
Omg... lol I'm nervous for drama and girl fighting.
Jaws28 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
loved the chapter, can't wait for the next one
MinaRivera chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
damn... now that's what a call riding the Volvo! LOL



MinaRivera chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
WOOT! GO BELLA! She has mad skillz...
SusanQ chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
OMG - too funny: "I'm sure your bitch of a girlfriend will do something to piss me off soon,"

I love that he gets he gets "rewarded" for the ice queen's bad behavior.
Remmykins1901 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Hell yeah! just be thankful Cullen! make sure you piss of Rose more! that was fucking Hot! he is sooo fucking adorable and fumbly!
Nicffwhisperer chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Excellent writing. I love a story that keeps my interest, has hot lemons (you do!) and it makes me laugh. Strong self assured Bella, check. Putting you on the poll for next week's fic of the week voting. Be sure to check for it Monday or Tuesday, a week from now and vote for you, bc I am :)
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