Reviews for Good Deal
Nicffwhisperer chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Excellent writing. I love a story that keeps my interest, has hot lemons (you do!) and it makes me laugh. Strong self assured Bella, check. Putting you on the poll for next week's fic of the week voting. Be sure to check for it Monday or Tuesday, a week from now and vote for you, bc I am :)
robsessed1123 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
gah! fuckin luvin this! ty bb ;)
obsmama chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Oh shes trying to act unaffected but she is a little bit already. I like hes such a teenage boy LOL.
Bella Ami chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Is this gonna be a drabble fic ? absolutely love it!

xoxox

ba
Bella Ami chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
Now THAT was the most awesome thing I've read in a while ! and I'm not ashamed to say something I would totally have done, back in the day that is!

xoxox

ba
Heather1970 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
I am so loving this story. Can't wait till you update.

Heather
Bella Ami chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
hell yes! sounds good to me so far!

xoxox

ba
TessLouise chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Aw, adorable, awkward Edward. I love it.
Dolly.Reader chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Holy Hannah! That was hot!

Bella's manipulative self has found a natural in the sack just waiting to be twisted into her scheme. What on earth will she do when she actually falls for him?

Thanks
MsHavisham79 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
well, that was a damn sight hotter than any in car trysts I had while in high school. Kind of makes me want to jump back a good 15 years and see if I can match it!

I love the idea of this story. Can't wait for more!
xtothey chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
I like Bella. A lot.
michelle0526 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Oh how I love this Bella! That was hot! She's got him hooked now!
xtothey chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
"Who are you?" he asked.

My grin widened. "Bella Swan. I hate your fucking girlfriend."

He blinked a couple of times and then nodded, closing those sharp, intelligent eyes.

"Good deal."

BEST PART!
xtothey chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
E/R usually makes me rage so I'm all for a fic where Bella is getting revenge :)
MoniNP Monica Nopi chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Awww... loving it! *winks* looking forward to more!xx MoniNP
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