Reviews for Good Deal
TessLouise chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Aw, adorable, awkward Edward. I love it.
Dolly.Reader chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Holy Hannah! That was hot!

Bella's manipulative self has found a natural in the sack just waiting to be twisted into her scheme. What on earth will she do when she actually falls for him?

MsHavisham79 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
well, that was a damn sight hotter than any in car trysts I had while in high school. Kind of makes me want to jump back a good 15 years and see if I can match it!

I love the idea of this story. Can't wait for more!
xtothey chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
I like Bella. A lot.
michelle0526 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Oh how I love this Bella! That was hot! She's got him hooked now!
xtothey chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
"Who are you?" he asked.

My grin widened. "Bella Swan. I hate your fucking girlfriend."

He blinked a couple of times and then nodded, closing those sharp, intelligent eyes.

"Good deal."

xtothey chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
E/R usually makes me rage so I'm all for a fic where Bella is getting revenge :)
MoniNP Monica Nopi chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Awww... loving it! *winks* looking forward to more!xx MoniNP
Cullenfan524 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
That was so good! These two belong together! I hope it has a HEA for them!
MasenCullen chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Steamy backseat high-school car sex is a right of passage. Bella's ballsy personality is delicious, I love how she's the one with the vendetta against Ice Queen.


PS An EPOV would be nice.
mani12191 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Lmfao I have to say, this a quite turn of events from Major Misconduct and I kinda really like this Bella. Edward really is too cute though. Can't wait to read what's happening next!
Burntcore chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
So instead of trying to steal Rosalie's boyfriend, she just fcks him. LOL
treymaine chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
:-) nice.
Courtney37 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Lol! Go Bella! I love her! But poor Edward. He seems...interested in her. :) I can't wait for more. Thanks again bye for now
vivalarye chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Loving this story line, can't wait for the next chapter!
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