Reviews for Good Deal
Liverbrd23 chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
I love the last lines! This made me laugh, great chapter.
KhristenHartgrove chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
oh i swear i fucking looove this! can we have an EPOV pleeeeeeease!
GrayMatters chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
*drops everything and runs to read*


*fans self* Lawdy, it's hot in here! Oh wait, that's Edward and Bella and that damn fine lemon.

*impatiently waits for another update*

Thanks so much for sharing :)
Maplestyle chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
So much love for it wrong that I'm hoping Rosalie pisses Bella off the next day? Is it wrong that I want Edward to encourage Rosalie to piss off Bella just so he can get some? Are we going to get his POV at all? Can't wait for next chapter.
FFpassion chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
hahaha hope Rose gets Bella angry soon as that was hot and Edward loved it D

Thank s for writing this fun story, loving it.


Just Me Alone chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Love it! I love that she just gets pissed at Rose so she fucks her BF or ex in this case for a few days anyway...this is awesome! I love this Bella, so sure of herself and Edward seems pretty confident as well.

So so good!


lalabelle chapter 3 . 11/13/2011
Interesting story and an interesting Bella...can't wait for the next update.
Jaws28 chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
awesome story, its fucking hilarious, can't wait for the next chapter
musegirl chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
I love Bella with gumption. And apparently an excellent BJ skill set. :o) I think I'm really going to enjoy her sticking it to Rosalie.
edwardfan111 chapter 2 . 11/13/2011

That was awesome - hee hee. Can't wait for the next chapter.
ze1uh chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
and so it begins ;)
jordanfan360 chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
LOL "Bella Swan. I hate your fucking girlfriend."
jordanfan360 chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
Awesome, I'm in for the ride ;)
TLammy chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
Tweets are flying fast and furious so I had to check out. Glad I did, wow...great start :)
TwiSherry chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
OMGOMGOMG .. all I can say is this makes me very demanding!

I want more more more.

So fucking HOT!
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