Reviews for Good Deal
whiti chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
Well Bella was a little forward...

and Edward didn't even know her name.
Hushi Taloa chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
Holy crow. Well, it's not the Bella from Major Misconduct, now is it? Or maybe it is her inner perv/sex goddess brought to life.

This could be veddy interesting...!

Thanks for writing!
interested party chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
Uh, wow! Not your usual style but I like it - I'm def along for the ride! I trust your writing, as always!

Thank you!
Cullenfan524 chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
Cullenfan524 chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
Woah! This looks quite interestig!
FionaCullen chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
I really loved your stories Coincidental Major and Major Misconduct, but I'm a little wary of this one...will there be an E&B HEA? I need to know before I start this. :)
Liverbrd23 chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
Well then, ahem... very good, please continue!
Nessa19 chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
And so it begins!
tff000 chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
certainly a different b :). can't wait to see how this unfolds
AnaFerg chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
lmfao the 'bella swan, I hate your fucking girlfriend' is the best line ever
twilightfictionfan chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
:) He needs to be Rosalie's ex-boyfriend asap.
allidel chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
I like it! This looks like it's going to be fun to read. I can't wait! Thanks for sharing! :)
TwiAngel13 chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
I'd feel sorry for Edward being used but I don't think he minds it all that much lol.
liam22 chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
Holy moly hot! Oh this Bella is going to be a blast to read, I can tell. Shall I start taking bets with myself over how attached Edward is going to get? With that much bravado who can blame him.
eternallyedward chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
Gah-go Bella! I guess I can't fault Edward too much for getting into the backseat with a strange girl to get a blowjob when he has a girlfriend (even if it is on/off). I guess not too many guys would protest lol. Love this! more pls.
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