Reviews for A Light in the Darkness: Awakened
Ashleigh2016 chapter 20 . 7/24/2012
I am glad to see that someone finally believes her. I can't tell you how much I am enjoying this story. I honestly have been wanting to find out what was going to happen all day.

May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You,
Ashleigh
Ashleigh2016 chapter 19 . 7/24/2012
Whoa, Jannes is sick, and not the good kind either. I love how you have managed to gradually developed his character. I can't wait to see what comes next. I have to see what happens to Lucy.

May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You,
Ashleigh
Ashleigh2016 chapter 18 . 7/24/2012
I say she is good and the only reason she is going to Jannes is to try to find Lucy. I really like it. I cannot wait to see what is going to happen next.

May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You,
Ashleigh
Ashleigh2016 chapter 17 . 7/24/2012
This is really good. I can't make myself stop reading it. I love the way you write Katerina, she is really good. I can't wait to see what happens next.

May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You,
Ashleigh
Ashleigh2016 chapter 16 . 7/24/2012
It was really well written. I am really enjoying it and I cannot wait to see how you fix this one.

May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You,
Ashleigh
Ashleigh2016 chapter 15 . 7/24/2012
You did a good job making that sorcerer seem evil. I can't stand him. Of course Katerina is innocent, but it is still making me nervous. It is really good and I ove the whole storyline.

May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You,
Ashleigh
Ashleigh2016 chapter 14 . 7/24/2012
How am I supposed to get anything done? I can't stop reading this. I absolutely love it. I love the way you write. It is really creative.

May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You,
Ashleigh
Ashleigh2016 chapter 13 . 7/24/2012
I can't wait to see where this is going. I just keep reading and I can't stop. I love it.

May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You,
Ashleigh
Ashleigh2016 chapter 12 . 7/24/2012
I really liked it. I think one o the biggest mistakes people make is to either make Lucy to dull and mature or to childish. You did a really good job keeping it somewhere in the middle. I really liked this chapter. You have done a really good job on this.

May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You,
Ashleigh
Ashleigh2016 chapter 11 . 7/24/2012
Whoa, definitely more intense than I expected, but it was still very well written. After the first chapters being so much more light this one was definitely more dark, but it fits very well. I as still really enjoying it.

May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You,
Ashleigh
Ashleigh2016 chapter 10 . 7/24/2012
As usual really well written. I loved the way she thought about the kings and queens. The descriptions were really good. I can't wait to see what happens.

May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You,
Ashleigh
Ashleigh2016 chapter 9 . 7/23/2012
This was really well written. The dialogue was really good, I thought, and at times that can be a hard thing to achieve. You did a really good job of keeping it natural, while still keeping all the Narnians and Katerina in character. I really enjoyed this chapter. The end was really good. I can't wait to see what the sorcerer has and is up to. I am sure that the evil sorcerer was not knitting. (I loved that line.)

May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You,
Ashleigh
Ashleigh2016 chapter 8 . 7/23/2012
I hope I did not sound rude in my last review. I am really enjoying it. I am picking up on the clues although I am still pretty confused. I guess, though, at this point I am supposed to be. I am enjoying it, and I love how she is just being herself and not letting herself become stressed because of the pressure to get the good guys on her side. Good story!

May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You,
Ashleigh
Ashleigh2016 chapter 7 . 7/23/2012
I love it. I am glad that you finally put some clue to who was behind this in here, as I was beginning to wonder. It is very well written and I am really enjoying it.

May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You,
Ashleigh
Ashleigh2016 chapter 6 . 7/23/2012
This story is awesome! I love it. I can tell just by this that Katerina Alambiel is going to be a handful. This is very well written and I am thoroughly enjoying it.

May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You,
Ashleigh
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