|Reviews for Stuck in the Middle of a Sibling Rivalry|
| Bj chapter 5 . 1/12
OMG hope u finish this it's gonna be supper good and funny I already put this in my favorites.! Plz I hope u finish it.!
| iDerpyCake chapter 5 . 12/24/2013
i think you should do what you want but Y . Y dont delete or give up on it 2 have a really good plot going on and idk i would like it 2 be the same but if you do change it or something i bet it would still be good
| Skyrobber chapter 3 . 10/22/2013
Reading so far, every chapter has me smiling. And like now I want more. I really love this! I can't wait for more. :)
| HimeyaK chapter 5 . 7/27/2013
For the continuation, maybe you should start with Ichigo and Shiro scene where they talk bout his bro, Grimm. And the pregnant part don't let Shiro know first, only when you find an appropriate time and then Ichigo will rush to the toliet to puke( morning sickness) and that time Shiro will be concern and then something happen and Ichigo told him. Shiro will be super jealous and wanted to thank his bro for mating his crush and making him pregnant. Well basically, this novel should be about a love triangle. Oh add some scene of his candidates too. Plus Hel also. U can't just erase the girls just like that but maybe like something so sudden and boom "Get out if my sight, I chose ichigo" oh maybe the reason why they are selected too maybe
Just my own opinion so u can't don't take it.
| Jazzy-Monster-5955 chapter 5 . 4/11/2013
CARRY ON WITH IT!
| Beat27 chapter 5 . 2/8/2013
But i like the story so far D: but if yoy are going to write a story then dont care if people review or not cuz most people (like me) just love to read the story and thats it...im also very obbsessed with GrimmIchi /
| AntiTamed chapter 3 . 2/3/2013
I love your story and hope you continue it. But if ya rewrite it could you clear up the part on Ichigo's hollow Shiro and the prince dude Hichigo Shirosaki Jeagerjaques. Cus they got me really confused. Are they different people? Anyways lovely story and twists their cool!
| rentamiya chapter 5 . 12/30/2012
This story is cool and interesting
The plot is quiete good
And you can continue this anytime
| Samij05 chapter 5 . 12/30/2012
Dont rewrite i love it the way it is now just keep moving forward plsssss
| JoeFandome chapter 5 . 12/29/2012
Id like you to continue I loved the story, thought it to be awesome! Hope you still continue, oh and happy early New Years!
| Orion'slover chapter 5 . 12/29/2012
Didn't really remember this one, reread it and its good, few places where words were left out but still good
| mimifoxlove chapter 5 . 12/29/2012
yes, I vote for a rewrite
| LoLo326 chapter 3 . 12/29/2012
This story definitely dose not need to be rewritten everything looks good for this story, grammar, spelling, plot, and suspense! :)
| meep615 chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Yea ok so I know I am only on the first chapter but so far (still only on chapter 1) I really do like your story. Sorry I usually wait till i read all the chapters posted to write a review so that way i don"t seem like I am just writing it to be nice(which I am NOT! -_-'). Anyway keep up the good work, your a great writer!
| rentamiya chapter 4 . 11/30/2012