Reviews for Immortals
Punk- Chan chapter 7 . 10/1/2014
update good story now update
Tashielove chapter 6 . 7/21/2014
I'm re-posting this because I missed some parts on the one I previously posted -.-
Name: Misaki Izumi (Or Izumi Misaki in Japanese)
Age: What ever age Amu is or 1-3 years older
Appearance: Pale skin, black and red hair (Like an ombre) that goes mid-back, has purple eyes with a hint of red, skinny, wears form fitting clothes like tight shirts and skinny jeans (usually wears ankle boots).
Personality: Is very friendly, but doesn't talk much, and she's very mysterious. But if she sees someone doing something wrong she will confront them. Also, she is smart (although she is not a genius) and she's not very sporty.
Type: Devil- Dark Usual
Mood: Very calm
Chara: Storm- Wears a black crop top, and black leggings and thigh high heeled boots and has (Represents the outgoing kind of person she wants to be- as in going to parties and causing mischief).
Creature: A monkey, or some type of bird (Owl or a Phoenix)
Tashielove chapter 7 . 7/21/2014
1ST OC:
Name: Misaki Izumi (Or Izumi Misaki in Japanese)
Age: What ever age Amu is or 1-3 years older
Appearance: Long black and red hair (Like an ombre), skinny, wears form fitting clothes (usually wears boots). She's also really pretty.
Personality: Is very friendly, but doesn't talk much. But if she sees someone doing something wrong she will confront them.
Type: Devil- Dark
Usual Mood: Very calm
Chara: Storm- Wears a black crop top, and black leggings and thigh high heeled boots and has (Represents the outgoing kind of person she wants to be as in going to parties and causing mischief).
Creature: A monkey, or some type of bird (Owl or
allie cunningham chapter 5 . 6/13/2014
it is funny that ikuto called you an horrible person foe nothing you did was rong though
allie cunningham chapter 3 . 6/13/2014
what didnt thay know frome the crystel ball
allie cunningham chapter 2 . 6/13/2014
it was allittel funnny when you said rand r plaes andwho is chu? anyways this is awsom and so are you
allie cunningham chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
i think it was good and now i know what thay all are
KL chapter 7 . 6/12/2014
Name: Chou Izumi
Age: 14 or 15
Appearance: Really pale waist-long lavender hair with golden eyes (like Amu's)
Personality: Likes gardening/plants, books, and obviously singing (because she's an angel). You'll usually find her reading/writing a book in a garden or a grassy area.
Type: Angel-Control (Is control a general thing, like if nobody has anything they specialize in, or a specific thing? If it is a specific thing, I want her to be able to control either plants and nonliving objects and possibly with her singing. Or just one of the two.)
Usual mood: quiet but happy
Charas: Kaede - represents her desire to become a professional in what she does (botany, writing, her powers, singing, etc.). Forest green ankle-long hair and eyes (the color of both her hair and eyes are like Kairi's hair but lighter). Wears a white lily petal gown.
Creature: Preferably a butterfly, but butterflies aren't creatures, so if you want something else, then a deer-like kirin (you'll find pictures of how it looks like if you search up on Google images: kirin asian unicorn. It looks really cute and looks like a deer combined with a horse, except it has fire near its chest area, but you can't exactly tell because it's not colored in).
Moli.B chapter 7 . 6/11/2014
Name: NikĊru Furuya
Age: Same as Amu.
Appearance: Midnight black hair and Amethyst eyes, Gothic
Personality: Comforting, kind and smart
Type:Angel-light
Usual mood: neutral
Charas: Sora (her dream to be set free), Sakura (to be athletic), Mai (her dream of being a performer.), Natsumi (her dream of being a fashion designer)
Creature: Swan
Guest chapter 7 . 6/8/2014
Why a horse why not say a phenix misspelled you know pink hair flames etc
joyce chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
Please please I NEED MORE !
fallenangelsreborncall chapter 7 . 6/5/2014
Please hurry and update.
StarElsie chapter 7 . 6/5/2014
Thanks for the update
Queenzeze chapter 8 . 11/30/2013
Update!
Yuki chapter 8 . 9/14/2013
Yuki Sakura
11
Shiny black hair waist length with Dark midnight blue eyes
Same as amu and ikutos mixed together
IMMORTAL
Bored
Angel-Ai cheerleader-Mikan Idol-Kirari
Pegasus
I wanna be amu's cousin .
And I love your fic so keep updating please
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