Reviews for Making Her Pay
SSAPrentiss chapter 16 . 1/25/2012
Great story! Loved the ending. They were so cute together. *sigh*

I didn't think Michael and Tash were awkward :)

You write really well! Look forward to more from you in the future! :)
Emtheunicorn chapter 16 . 1/25/2012
Awww that was a sweet ending :)

It was a great story
spbabe9 chapter 16 . 1/25/2012
I quite enjoyed the whole story. I liked how you showed the whole team trying to protect Stella. I'm glad Josh and Shannon found Matt.

Keep writing.
Ktime chapter 16 . 1/24/2012
Great end to great story, fantastic work :)
SSAPrentiss chapter 15 . 1/22/2012
Great update!

Im glad that Shannon and josh got Matt. You wrote Josh really well. I believe that's exactly what he would do in the show.

Great job, update soon! :)
Emtheunicorn chapter 15 . 1/22/2012
Another brilliant chapter :) update soon !
rwheelz82 chapter 14 . 1/4/2012
Great chapter, Michael's reaction was really good, can't wait to see what Michael and Josh do when they find Matt! They will be more physical than verbal I would think! :) Don't want this story to end :( Hope you write another one after this!
TacticalRush chapter 13 . 12/23/2011
Great story!

I feel sorry for Stella. Hope they catch Matt before he gets to her again.

Keep up the great work.
spbabe9 chapter 13 . 12/18/2011
I really hope they find Matt soon! It's not fair what he's doing to Stella. Thanx 4 the frequent updates!
rwheelz82 chapter 13 . 12/18/2011
i am glad that stella has stopped being STUPID and is now going to get some help! great chapter thanks for not leaving it on a huge suspense over the holidays! Have a great Christmas!
Ktime chapter 13 . 12/18/2011
Great chapter loving it!
sivy64 chapter 13 . 12/17/2011
great chapter! really wanna see what michaels reaction is! :)
rwheelz82 chapter 12 . 12/9/2011
am lovin this story!

keep written dont worry about the wait in between chapters!

you must have other priorities over this hobby!

sorry about your dog.


sivy64 chapter 12 . 12/9/2011
sorry to hear about your dog :(

i think the relationship youve portrayed betweeen michael and stella is the sweetest! x
Emtheunicorn chapter 10 . 11/30/2011
That was brilliant ! I loved the end where it broke Michael's heart to see Stella so weak coz it wasn't like her
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