Reviews for Making Her Pay
SSAPrentiss chapter 16 . 1/25/2012
Great story! Loved the ending. They were so cute together. *sigh*

I didn't think Michael and Tash were awkward :)

You write really well! Look forward to more from you in the future! :)
Emtheunicorn chapter 16 . 1/25/2012
Awww that was a sweet ending :)

It was a great story
spbabe9 chapter 16 . 1/25/2012
I quite enjoyed the whole story. I liked how you showed the whole team trying to protect Stella. I'm glad Josh and Shannon found Matt.

Keep writing.
Ktime chapter 16 . 1/24/2012
Great end to great story, fantastic work :)
SSAPrentiss chapter 15 . 1/22/2012
Great update!

Im glad that Shannon and josh got Matt. You wrote Josh really well. I believe that's exactly what he would do in the show.

Great job, update soon! :)
Emtheunicorn chapter 15 . 1/22/2012
Another brilliant chapter :) update soon !
rwheelz82 chapter 14 . 1/4/2012
Great chapter, Michael's reaction was really good, can't wait to see what Michael and Josh do when they find Matt! They will be more physical than verbal I would think! :) Don't want this story to end :( Hope you write another one after this!
TacticalRush chapter 13 . 12/23/2011
Great story!

I feel sorry for Stella. Hope they catch Matt before he gets to her again.

Keep up the great work.
spbabe9 chapter 13 . 12/18/2011
I really hope they find Matt soon! It's not fair what he's doing to Stella. Thanx 4 the frequent updates!
rwheelz82 chapter 13 . 12/18/2011
i am glad that stella has stopped being STUPID and is now going to get some help! great chapter thanks for not leaving it on a huge suspense over the holidays! Have a great Christmas!
Ktime chapter 13 . 12/18/2011
Great chapter loving it!
sivy64 chapter 13 . 12/17/2011
great chapter! really wanna see what michaels reaction is! :)
rwheelz82 chapter 12 . 12/9/2011
am lovin this story!

keep written dont worry about the wait in between chapters!

you must have other priorities over this hobby!

sorry about your dog.

KEEP WRITING!

xxxx
sivy64 chapter 12 . 12/9/2011
sorry to hear about your dog :(

i think the relationship youve portrayed betweeen michael and stella is the sweetest! x
Emtheunicorn chapter 10 . 11/30/2011
That was brilliant ! I loved the end where it broke Michael's heart to see Stella so weak coz it wasn't like her
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