|Reviews for Son of the Underworld|
| acesznnn chapter 4 . 1/1
| sparta300 chapter 1 . 11/8/2020
Ok I saw Apollyon say something that is wrong, also btw this was great. Your writing is great as well. Plus what he said about Hades children is totally wrong. Nico was really happy and energetic at the beginning and Bianca was just cold because of their tough childhood. But even she was friendly.
| LuciferNightflo chapter 16 . 10/27/2020
I like this. Good writing
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2020
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/28/2020
The premise of this story sounded pretty interesting and the beginning was rather good but as I read the later chapters I’m starting to wonder why the hell is Percy so fucking weak. Is he mentally retarded or just fucking stupid? Like why the hell would someone just ducking torture themselves everyday by being in a place where no one clearly accepts them and then feeling hurt when no one likes them. I mean this shit is starting to get old and tiring real fast. Is he that fucking starved for friends or acceptance? Also every time he can’t take it and snaps, it only lasts for a very brief amount of time which there’s no point to him snapping in the first place if his anger ia just gonna drain away the next second. And that thing with the gods liking him, it’s not useful at all if the demigods hate him, I mean it’s just gonna make him an outcast. I enjoyed reading this story at first but now I’m just frustrated. Nevertheless, you put some effort into writing this so I wish you best of luck in your future pieces
| xXMoonlitSorrowsXx chapter 1 . 9/2/2020
Good story! Except some grammar mistakes such as using the wrong words. But overall very interesting story, I feel there's still unresolved issues between his Dad and cabin members. Will there be a sequel?
| TheMeister7 chapter 1 . 7/25/2020
I would probably end up eating a whole pack of ambrosia and drinking a whole canteen of nectar. So far so good! Rlly enjoying it
| The Master 19 chapter 1 . 6/30/2020
Can I adopt your story? I will give all credit to you. Son of the underworld 2 will be under the name The Master 10, The Master 19 or The Sci fy guy. Many Thanks
| Nargelz chapter 6 . 5/9/2020
I mean Nico wasn’t completely accepted but people were still nice to him
| Nargelz chapter 2 . 5/9/2020
Please tell me that he at least connects to nico and Bianca!
| The-owl-wolf-the-viper-demon chapter 12 . 5/3/2020
...I have seen and sensed demons and angles and spirits too I have visited the spirit world i am part native American I believe that i have the soul of a wolf but the body of a human because my body feels wrong like i am the wrong being the wrong creature the wrong species i am attuned to animals and prefer animals then humans
| Sein Hall chapter 1 . 4/7/2020
The story is definitely wrong; Hades sent Alecto because he suspected that Percy was a child of the sea. If he sired the child, then he would've felt his aura be similar to his, and not the sea's. Also, this story already has great grammatical errors. It's as if a child wrote this. Also, children of Hades would've stayed away from anyone, even if they helped them. They would've grudgingly thanked them and then leave, not to talk to them again. A great example would be Nico; his sister was the main cause for his personality change, and Percy, without his kind mother, would've been bitter as well. Speaking of Percy's mother, he would've had BLACK eyes, even if his mother had green, because demigods inherit their parent's eyes, hair, and a portion of their personalities. Sally would've gave him the personality she has by teaching him, like to never disrespect women or take listen to of another's opinion.
Overall, the story is already terrible, but I'm going to rewrite this... with your permission. If you don't respond in thirty days at least, then I'll take it as a no, and I'd just rewrite it for my own person reading...
Sorry if this sounds rude, but it gets on my nerve when there's obvious grammar mistakes.
| garden galaxy chapter 1 . 3/6/2020
percy as hades son is a new take
| Entropy the Eternal chapter 16 . 1/27/2020
Where is "Son of the Underworld 2"?
| Jasongraceforeve chapter 3 . 1/24/2020
This is amazing!