Reviews for Tenacious
GLaDHal chapter 5 . 12/30/2011
Wow, who would have thought a rat could end her (you of course). So much cuteness in this fic. Oh and their names, it almost makes me want to change my birds' name. I loved it how you made glados freak out, it's just like peer review. Not to mention, the "Aperture Science Avian Soldier Training Video" almost made me spill my coffee. I just want to say thank you for using your wonderful talent for us portal fans.
curtisimo chapter 1 . 12/30/2011

i cant help but notice you didnt take my advice.

this does not amuse me.

perhaps i was imprecise:


there we go. fixed that.

perhaps you demand some ritualistic sacrifice, or a chant?

ill get everyone to do it.


'or chap four!

i will have no part in this, curtisimo.

FACT! there should be more chapter four.


i agree with the pretty lady!


*snarl* FOUR *growl*

*awkwardly silent*

ooh, whats chapter four? why does everyone want more chapter four? i want more chapter four!

rhubarb; diced, rhubarb; chopped, rhubarb; flaming, chapter four; extended. whip lightly, salt.

are you still listening?


*high pitched squeaky noises*

*low pitched squeaky noises*

warning: not continuing chapter four is hazardous to your well being. to encourage the writing process, smooth jazz is being deployed.

cave johnson! were done here. oh, and chapter four, all that crap.

can you name everyone, in order? BOOOOOOP is hardest.
FeeptheNinja won't login chapter 5 . 12/30/2011

"So, really all this time you were just after a hug? You mean all this time I could have avoided testing and just gave you a hug?"

I am filing this away for future reference. X3
Pandora.Writing chapter 5 . 12/30/2011
Awww. So fluffy. 3 Utterly adorable.
Zanna-chan chapter 5 . 12/30/2011
Faux Promises chapter 5 . 12/30/2011
Aw, I freakin' love GLaDOS and her birds. I thought I was going to die of cute when she said "Mr. Chubbybeak." She's just so freaking adorable, who would have ever guessed she could be that cute.

You know, that prompt doesn't sound like it has to be pornographic. Well unless the requester specified it of course. Then again I may be one of three people in this section that isn't into either Chelley or ChellDOS. Or porn, at that. XD;

Best wishes,

Jarvey chapter 4 . 12/18/2011
Wow, these shorts are excellent. If I were to pick, I would hope to see more of Chapter 4... although my dark side is calling for more chapter 3...


Keep up the great writing!
Jamiwami chapter 4 . 12/17/2011
WoW...This was so touching, definately the best chapter yet. You captured both GLaDOS character and Chell's emotions perfectly. I kinda liked/loved the idea of GLaDOS putting Chell's consience into her own mind. It's sweet in a twisted sense that I can see GLaDOS doing it. Hopefully Chell would forgive her though lol. Brilliant work! :D I look forward to more of their dynamic captured in your writing :) Just one question though, does this mean Chell can communicate with Caroline?
ButtRice chapter 4 . 12/16/2011
This.. this was beautiful. I'm in awe.
JenovaII chapter 3 . 12/15/2011
Oh gosh.


I didn't prompt this, but i wish i would have. WOW. Genius, right here. GLaDOS? Perfect. Chell? Perfect. I'm totally derping because i'm at a loss for proper words. I mean WOW.

This is...close to where i'm going in my story. Close. But i'm a little...fluffier. It makes me feel a little bad, really, for being so nice and fluffy while your stuff is so DARK and PERFECT and WONDERFUL and omg i'm derpin' again...

And i'm not even at the fourth story...
Zanna-chan chapter 4 . 12/10/2011
...This story is amazing!

You ever thought about writing as a career?
ITman496 chapter 4 . 12/10/2011
Wow... you seriously write the best portal stuff ever! X3
curtisimo chapter 4 . 12/10/2011
ya know, i know your whole thing with tenacious is to fill random prompts, but i kinda want a sequel to this. its interesting. wait, idea!

prompt: create a sequel to this.

yeah. that works.

curtisimo - we're done here.
GLaDHal chapter 4 . 12/10/2011
So many emotions, How did you do this? It's perfect. You made me angry, sad, hopeful... So many things. Very wonderful.
Ashardalon125 chapter 4 . 12/9/2011
Amazing. Simply, amazing
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