Reviews for Feelings
LoneWolf333 chapter 2 . 7/16/2012
My cat knows parkour, but he tends to use it for mainly for attacking me from odd places, like the top of door frames, the curtain rods, the shower head (that was a particularly unpleasant surprise), and on a few occasions the ceiling.
LeatherApron chapter 2 . 2/25/2012
Not my cup of tea, its well written but that's about it. You see, You destroyed Max's reputation and it seems like Jake is to nice. and the story seems to not be going anywhere. Try showing some flaws of the characters, such as the crush Peannut has on Grape.
Skyestorm chapter 2 . 11/18/2011
Aww great job! Peanut FTW!