Reviews for For You
weasleyjumper chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Beautiful, really summed up how he must have felt! I love it!
MoonyandProngs chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
That was nice to read. I liked it.
Inspired178 chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
You did really well if this is your first. I too write poetry, and I have done a few on Severus or Severus and Lily. Just a few words of advice; you need to pull the emotion from yourself. You need to have a strong surge of emotion in order to have the poem reflect. If you are feeling dark, write a dark poem. It's all about emotion when it comes to writing poems. I would say give it another shot, and keep on writing.

~Inspired178

PS I know that advice sounded dramatic, but poetry really does come from the soul.