Oh, my gosh! I love this. Please continue. I love the poetry! Bravo!

Amazing chapter! Very deep and moving! I hope everything works out! I really enjoyed it! I look forward to reading more!

What a wonderful idea. Sad, but hopefully things will get better,

So I'm going to be very concise.

I want more. As soon as humanly possible.

Demanding? Yes.

But you only have yourself to blame for hooking me on one of your stories so thoroughly. Again.

As always, beautiful prose, elegant structure, perfect characterisations and a downright fabulous plot idea.

Oh. Ouch. So much pain.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Whoa. That was... weird. And absolutely amazing. I loved it! If you want to continue, I would definitely read it... but then again, it works beautifully as it is now. Either way, well done.

Everyone loves the episode 'Rise' except me I think. And it's the thought of how miserable, how discarded Castle must have felt those three months that makes me dislike it. It's how callous she seems when I know she's not really. I bled for him even more reading this, yet it was cathartic in a strange way - and beautiful.

This is such a wonderful idea ! Wow, I'm so taken with the beginning of this story. You say you don't know where it came from, well I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes :)

Oh, wow. This was gorgeous. Is this a oneshot or will there be more, because I'd certainly love it if you continued! But even as a standalone this was amazing. Lovely job!

DM

Love this! What a clever twist on the dark summer. I really hope you give us the next chapter so we can see his reaction to her call.

Very profound and visceral! Without neccessarily touching directly on it, every word howls about unrequited love that is, in fact, fully requited. In silence, in looks. Wonderful stuff.

I am seriously trying to find the right words to say what I thought of this and nothing is good enough. The poem was just beautiful. I can not wait to see this update!