|Reviews for Beating the Heat|
| Guest chapter 15 . 2/12
This was epic! I love the story and love/hate the left out sex details. It lets me imagine but sometimes I wanted a writers description. But it was awesome! Although I have to say... I felt bad for Spike. More than anything. And I get that they are traveling and will be back when he's older and all, but I felt like he was being shat on the entire series. I felt true Darrow for him... But it was still awesome! Are there more? Please tell me there's more!
| Ashen Author chapter 7 . 2/8
I just realized, was the princess's hoofmaiden and the guy who fired them out of a cannon a reference to Progress? That's wonderful!
And while they've got a special place for you in pony hell, at least you'll have readers to keep you company.
| Wat chapter 1 . 1/26
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/17
I really love your story i think u should do more there so amazing _
| Ashen Author chapter 6 . 1/8
I LOVE the way Big Mac shot her down. Completely unexpected and it makes perfect sense.
| Ashen Author chapter 2 . 1/8
Oh, this is evil. Sinfully wonderful and completely hilarious. I've seen one story where Twilight hit her cycle and freaked out rarity by not knowing it was called 'heat' but aside from that I think it's unique. And I loved the Python reference.
| Unade chapter 6 . 1/6
Hillarious. Luna's way to deal with the heat, and the vision of what could have been, made me laugh to tears. I didn't expected it could be surpassed by anything in this chapter. And then, came the reference to the Watchmen with Fluttershy. (Standing, and tear-laughing, ovation).
| Unade chapter 4 . 1/6
Zecora's rymes... The best. X.D
| Unade chapter 2 . 1/5
When I stop laughing I will try to writte a good review.
Awesomtastic and funny.
| FinalGuardian chapter 3 . 11/8/2013
This was a random find but its greatly amusing XD.
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/8/2013
Tardis stands for time and relitive dimensions in space, not distance, other than tehat, exelentstoryso farM
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/4/2013
The readers to spike: RUN NIGGA RUN!
| Ittam the Great chapter 6 . 10/13/2013
I don't usually review on things, but this has to be the best chapter so far.
I flipping called it when Mustang was going to say the famous quote.
I flipping called it when Luna just wanted to play Pirates with Pip.
I flipping called it when Snips and Snails where going to come out to Fluttershy and she was going to reject them.
Great chapter, can't wait to read the rest.
| wtf was that chapter 15 . 8/23/2013
Wtf u put doctor who in this wtf dude wtf
| Equestria'sHistorian chapter 15 . 8/21/2013
Pretty pretty please call one of the twins apple pie if you write a sequel!