|Reviews for The Ponyta Story|
| WyldClaw chapter 4 . 1/10/2020
where will Ponyta go now?
| WyldClaw chapter 3 . 1/10/2020
| WyldClaw chapter 2 . 1/10/2020
those fire type pokemon were jerks to that poor ponyta
| Venusaurite chapter 13 . 2/4/2015
But why isn't the Liberation Association located in unova, like with the Team plasma stuff?
| dannymxyz chapter 23 . 10/3/2014
Sequel? I want to know Ponyta's name.
| xCharmedCat chapter 23 . 11/3/2010
This story wasn't what I expected, and I liked it.
Good job, you should make a sequel. Suddenly, I want to pair up Jolteon with Ponyta's now.
| WyldClaw chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
I feel so bad for that particular ponyta. why can't she use fire attacks?
| Azure Neko chapter 23 . 5/1/2008
This story is beautiful. Thank you.
| Millie-pops chapter 23 . 3/20/2008
Words don't desribe how much I truly, trly loved this. It's such an original idea,combined with your flawless grammar and spelling, it had me hooked from the first to the last word.
When I very first started this story, I though it was going to be about a Shiny Ponyta, or one with a resistence to Water-type moves, but this is such a brilliant idea.
Ashley's death was very moving. Scarth that; this whole peice was 'very 'moving. It's all about finding yourslef, which is something so many of us really need to do.
Again, trul wonderful. Superd. Stunning. I need more adjectives. Great job! Keep it up! Best wishes,
| pokecool chapter 23 . 11/20/2007
Cool story, its had me hooked.
Ifyou have the will and the time, please write another one like it!
| Pieling chapter 23 . 9/6/2007
Wow. This fic was amazingly good. It has incredible literary value - it's the classic "growing up and finding yourself" story but with a wonderfully unique twist that the Pokemon element gave it. I mean, I could really analyze this like I would a book for AP Literature! I loved all the themes that appeared in the fic - the conflict of the physical and metaphysical, living with grief while finding happiness, loss and abandonment, the barriers of communication, isolation v. companionship, etc. etc. I could go on and on. I loved how you had an interesting external conflict that coexisted with the main internal conflict, and that complimented each other and entwined to create a wonderful story. Bravo! I am really impressed.
| Shadewolf7 chapter 23 . 6/5/2007
Sweet, sad... and her out-of-placeness kind of reminds me of me.
| Mew3692002 chapter 23 . 4/27/2007
I guess that Blastoise didn't really have much to do with Ashley's death but it's still sad. I'm glad that Ponyta finally refound her love though. Great story though, I really liked it.
| Mew3692002 chapter 22 . 4/27/2007
Oh my god! Ashley is dead! That is so sad... It didn't get much of a reaction in me when I read it, but still... That is terrible. Hopefully snap will help her deal with this pain.
| Mew3692002 chapter 21 . 4/27/2007
Hmm... Very interesting... I wonder what King was doing at that time in the morning? Pretty good chapter, I can't wait to see how this turns out.