Reviews for Better man
AbandonedAccount40405005 chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
why is it rated K if the entire chapter of rape? i mean at least make it T nothing against the story just dont want it to get in trouble because the rating is inaccurate
wolf lover of michigan chapter 8 . 1/23/2013
Okay Sam so needs to fine her, that other guy just needs to go away update soon
SilverDragon13 chapter 2 . 9/29/2012
i like the idea but the way its written is reall repetitive
ihatevampslovewolfs chapter 7 . 8/13/2012
I so want to kill them now after what they did to her
Marnie Wolffe chapter 7 . 4/6/2012
Sorry I have to say this, coz its killing me, ok read the chapter epic, but an idea came to me. What if one time when Nessa's ex is beating on her, and Sam just so happens to walk in, and sees what he's doing to her? And why doesn't Nessa fight back I mean I know she must hate being raped, and beaten everytime by her ex, she should at least stand up to him? She ever gets back to Sam I think he needs to teach her to fight.
wolf lover of michigan chapter 7 . 2/22/2012
I would love to read more of this story, I really liked it.
Kaitlynn chapter 6 . 1/14/2012
Do a story about when Vanessa finds out that she is pregnant
wolf lover of michigan chapter 6 . 12/26/2011
loved it, glad her and sam are back together
wolf lover of michigan chapter 5 . 12/13/2011
I love this story. I sure hope she goes back to Sam. Please update soon
Marnie Wolffe chapter 4 . 12/8/2011
Nice I like it, poor Vanessa I hope Sam gets her back geeze why does Emily have to be a pain in the ###? I mean seriously she needs to learn to leave Sam n Vanessa alone when she gonna learn? But other then that I thought it was well written great job. Oh btw as for my story for u I'm not sure what Emily's secret will be I'm having a hard time with that I might have her as a real werewolf or something else I'm not quite sure what it will be yet I'm going thru n re reading it making sure I didn't leave anything out. Oh n when Nessa does take Sam back just to piss Emily off Leah invites her to the wedding (grins) best of luck on chapter 5
wolf lover of michigan chapter 4 . 12/8/2011
no she can't leave Sam:( hope she don't go back to that other the new chapter.
wolf lover of michigan chapter 3 . 11/28/2011
I loved the new chapter, can't waite for more
marnie wolffe chapter 3 . 11/27/2011
you continue to amaze me with ur stories I love it. Hey just outta curiouisty how come Nessa is never a werewolf or something like that? I could c Emliy I guess trying to get Sam back n maybe she ends up with Nessa's ex boyfriend n somehow they try to get the ones they want back by working to gether, but Sam n Nessa don't fall for it. Sorry just a thought. I was wondering if there is anything else u would like for me to add to ur story? oh btw since u've written fanfics for wrestling? I was wondering if u coul maybe help me? C I was planning on writting one of my own for wrestling
m3gan4tor chapter 3 . 11/27/2011
love it :)
wolf lover of michigan chapter 2 . 11/23/2011
OMG I loved it PLEASE update soon,Sam is so sweet.
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