Reviews for Two Plus Two
Sass-Bot chapter 3 . 8/31/2013
This is really good so far :D
I must admit I like Panya more than Jen so far, but I'm sure with some time she'll grow on me.
I'm actually an Arab so I had tons of fun reading all of Panya's insults even though some of your knowledge about the language is a bit off. And it also took me quite a while to figure out that the X was supposed to indicate the Arabic KH sound haha
Still I wish you'd continue this :D I really wanna see where it goes
A Weird Production chapter 3 . 11/30/2012
more more more! i love this story!
Dustfinger's cheering section chapter 2 . 7/26/2012
Please write more. It's a very good story.
White Fairy Writer chapter 2 . 7/1/2012
Ooh, i love this story! I wish you had kept it going, but oh well.
ReNobody chapter 2 . 2/16/2012
Update PLEASE! I rarely find a romance for Marik that doesn't have a hint of yaoi. For that, I give you cookie.
Insane Laine chapter 2 . 2/10/2012
I like the Egyptian words you've added in. I enjoy doing things like that with my writing too.

I feel sorry for Jennifer, having to see that scene. :c

I'm enjoying this story. Update soon please! :D
Insane Laine chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
Read this yesterday and tried to review, but FFN wouldn't let me on any computer, so here I am now. :)

You succeeded in Jennifer seeming too chatty and a bit annoying, but I find myself liking her anyway.

I enjoyed reading this first chapter. I'm looking forward to the Marik/Jennifer scenes! :D
xXxRandom KatxXx chapter 2 . 1/1/2012
Please update. Pwease, pwease, pwease... *says please for about an hour*
blackvampcat92 chapter 2 . 11/20/2011
Awesome story can't wait till the chapter.
ImTheSnarkKnight chapter 2 . 11/20/2011
I like the way this is starting :) I cant wait to see whats next!
phanpiggy chapter 2 . 11/18/2011
I like your use of real Egyptain words... Nice touch...
phanpiggy chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
HAHAHA! OMG, my name's Jennifer! This is the first fic I've ever read that uses my name... Too funny! Love it! Nice to know that someone out there thinks Jennifer is a pretty name... I don't know if I like it that well, but I suppose everyone hates their name...

Keep writing!
The Duelist's Heiress chapter 2 . 11/17/2011
Loved the freakout, and for the record, that is the best most concise description of the Millennium Rod's abilities I have ever read in my life, KUDOS on that.

Do you have to show that one scene? I don't want to have to break out the tissue box or stress ball this early in a fic... or have sympathy for Mr. Manipulative this early either...

Great job though and I look forward to the next installment.

TDH
Little.Miss.Fortune chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
It seems interesting. I would like to read more.
Slashers R Us chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Holy crap, you're right. I think Ishizu just charmed me right on the spot. lol XD

Awesome story, can't wait to read more!
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