|Reviews for A Legend is Born|
| CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 26 . 10/4
Is there a site that had this story but still has the lemons included?
| Hyrulian Hero Akai chapter 49 . 9/20
Sooo... I dunno if anyone has pointed this out yet, but Ash just earned the Coral Eye badge for the second time now... you really need to check these things before posting along with Pokemon names which you often misspell in some places but then later spell em correctly, and sometimes flip-flop between the incorrect and correct spelling. Still, Im enjoying this so far, old friend. Looking forward to the two sequals and I've a question, forgive me if you've covered it an a later chap or one of the sequals, but do you plan to have Ash travel through Kalos? How 'bout Alola?
| Chris657 chapter 1 . 9/5
technically hyperbeam can hit Gengar if conditions are met and it doesn't just apply to type I fighting typ move like Focus blast can still hit a ghost type because it is a special type move not a physical type
| WotTheHeck chapter 1 . 9/3
Further4life don't hate, why don't you try making the perfect book?
| Further4life chapter 18 . 9/3
HYPER BEAM WOULD NOT HIT GENGAR DUMBARSE
| 6SkullAngel chapter 5 . 8/6
A revieuw on your chapter 5 of your story.
between chapter 4 and 5 is a part missing about capturing Growlithe and Pidgeotto.
also the part of evolution from Caterpie to metapod to Butterfree is un explained it just states it has happend. just like the captures, it makes reading it a bit unpleasant if things like that happen.
Also little type error spotted. you forgot the A in Dratini
| ShadowDeathSkull chapter 61 . 7/21
Very interesting story though I am alittle disappointed that you gave up on lemons... but hey I do respect yiu for looking out for your stories
| lonewolf420 chapter 42 . 7/20
Definitely like this story so far, but a couple little mistakes I noticed where first you said if he won a league his Pokemon would go up to carrying 10 at a time but when he won you only increased it to 8, second when you where naming the 8 Pokemon he currently has with him you named 8 Pokemon on his belt and Pikachu was on his shoulder which made nine, and finally it the 4th of July that gets lit up with fireworks not the 5th. These of course are minor mistakes that haven't detracted from my enjoyment of the story at all but I know how a lot of writers want to have there mistakes pointed out so they can be fixed.
| XxFollowUpGamerxX chapter 24 . 7/14
to all critics united and fandom police GO FUCK YOURSELF
WHO THE FUCK CARES ABOUT WHAT YOU SAY. I MAKE FANFICS AND I MAKE WHAT EVER THE FUCK I WANT SO TAKE YOUR NEEDLE DICKS AND SHOVE THEM UP YOUR OWN ASS.
THEN GO JUMP OFF THE NEAREST CLIFF CAUSE YOU DESERVE TO DIE...
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/11
only 1 critisize...the ability is water absorb not absorb but you got the idea right so it counts btw im the same guest that commented on cjapter 3 about red and blue
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/11
im reading this in 2017 and having recently played red this battle at the end could have been red and blue and since blue is mean to his pokemon in the original anime of red and blue (only aired in japan) this description fits for those two trainers also good job on this fic i LOVE it
| Tychon chapter 12 . 6/25
I REALLY need an adult now. Halp.
| Tychon chapter 9 . 6/25
I feel like I need an adult.
| The OC maker chapter 24 . 6/18
Darn those CriticsUnited jerks, although now that I think about it don't you have this story on AFF? you could always fill in the blanks they forced you to erase on their. (that or Archive of our own?)
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/18
O god i hate when someone sets up on me