noooooo no lemon? ... hayyysss... hate that CriticUnited...

OHHHH THANKS GOD AND HERE I THOUGHT HE'LL JUST BECAME A BABY SITTER FOR THE BABY ZAPTOS! WEW...

Finally change it... it feels weird always calling Lucario son...

and niicee! first pokemon who joined him by battling him... although he just used two moves -_-

FOUR BABIES TO GO! HAHAHHAHAHHA

ARCEUS: O CHOSEN ONE! I PICKED YOU TO BE THE CHOSEN ONE BECAUSE I GOT FCKING TIRIED TAKING CARE OF ALL OF MY KIDS... I WANT YOU TO BE MY SUBSTITUTE... SPECIALLY MEW... SHES TOOOO FCKING SPOILED!

WTF... another fckinng spoiler!... Im having atrouble to imagine pikachus voice here...

…...damn... I knew Mew is playfull…. but he's probably hundred, thousand if not millions years old...and daddy?... that take a lot from me...

Shiny Dratini….. that's a spoiler... I hope next chap give him more challenge... don't want him to be cocky bastard

ARCEUS YOU WILL JUST FREAKING MAKE YOUR 'CHOSEN' A SPOILED BRAT!

….father is acceptable...

AND OUR HERO'S FIRST KISS!

A legend is born ch 2 when you write

Never mind. That's what happens when you take a break from a story to read another story. You get them mixed up lol NOW he has 5 badges. I have noticed that a lot of Ash's battles he tends to one-shot his opponents. Gym leaders probably shouldn't be that easy to beat. Well, except when using Mew.

Slight error. He had 4 badges and was trying for his 5th. Brock, Misty, Surge, then Erika. Sabrina would have been 5 but obviously her dad took over

How and why does Gary have an Arcanine at this point?

Challenge point one: smart ash

10 seconds later

tried to catch a Pokemon by throwing a rock.

Mission failed, we'll get'em next time