Reviews for A Legend is Born |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is great cant wait to see what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far, I like the way that you are developing ash to less stupid and incompetent and yet still staying true to his character of being a higher active ten year old who loves Pokemon and still makes mistakes from time to time. Loving your choice of Pokemon to give him so far, especially riolu, and if I could I suggest giving him a drattini and a nidoran male. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. |
![]() ![]() Loving it so far. Have Ash and Misty get Eevees and have his evolve to umbreon and hers to vaporeon |
![]() ![]() woops forgot more misty a seel,female gyarados(maybe ash's gyarados's mate),vaporeon,Tentacruel(misty's fav)and horsea. |
![]() ![]() I like that arceus is interfearing hopefully he'll constantly make team rocket fail and get them off ash's case, for the legendary ash get's it's more then likely either mew or mewtwo. for pokemon to catch the rest of ash's originals(charmader,butterfree,tauros,bulbasaur,muk,krabby,pidgeotto),along with haunter,male nidoran,ekans and koffing (just to piss off team rocket),dratini,gyarados,rhyhorn & magnemite.I like what ash has so far keep up the good work and hopefully more team rocket bashing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story so far and I think your doing an awesome job. I like the pairing of Ash and Cynthia but I also like it to be Ash and May, but I'll leave it up to you. For future pokemon can Ash and Misty both catch an Eevee that way Misty can have her Vaporeon and Ash's could be anyone you choose. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wanted a blastoid super power blastoid...lol it look like a tank. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good so far! I would like to see some killer action though lol, please don't make Ash stupid, and give hime a criminal dad or something. Most story tend to do that; it just kill the mood in reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() only lucario is a fighting steel type. riolu is just a pure fighting type other then that i see nothing wrong. Ash/Cynthia, wooo. love that pairing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey its me who suggested yo have ash x cynthia i was lazy to login thanx for accepting my sugesstion on ce again great chapter loved it ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, pretty good start. Just to tell you, cause I had to explain this to one of my reviewers, Riolu is actually a pure Fighting-type. It doesn't become part Steel until evolution. Just trying to help. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() Nice story, but lack of pika battling |
![]() ![]() ash saved cynthia it's going to be interesting when ash gets to hoenn. |
![]() ![]() i hey nice idea for story great continue good work make Ash x Cynthia pairing plese in future |