Reviews for A Legend is Born |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have noticed that all the limes and lemons have been removed from this book. There for this would be at most a Teen rated story at most. Also I have noticed that in a few author notes it mentions Said limes and lemons being in the story yet they are not there. So I'm assuming they were originally there but were removed or there is a uncensored version of this that is not in the bio or listed on the site. If the latter plz send link, if the former plz let me know the reason for this and change rating of the story accordingly. I ask this cuz the current rating for this story does not match the content. Other than this it's a pretty good story |
![]() ![]() this is fantastic! |
![]() ![]() did actually want riolu to be female as well seeing as therer are or were very less female riolus ash should have abra he should capture all those 3 brock has one misty has one ash has one |
![]() ![]() ash should have female pokemon water starters ditto he should ahve aura user dark psychic he should halso have a ditto he should be a pokemon user as well please |
![]() ![]() Story’s barely started and there’s like 20 misspelled words. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there, about your little rant aboveis, because the anime is based on the games, where in every game you start anew and Ash is doing the same in the anime his skills are reduced to that of a beginner so is Pikachu's powerlevel. There is another fic: "Ash and Dawn : The Unova Chapter" from autor Tzhaa In this fic it is explained that the Pokemonleague can limit a trainer pokemons powerlevel until it is nearly zero. Also the powerlevel in each Gym is limited, which is showed in the gym battle of panaero city. There is also a sequel to this fic: "The Legacy of Aura" where Ash is going against the world government and later his own father. Those stories are very nice to read. PS: your writing is sometimes a bit confusing or it is your writingprogramm. I am not a native english speaker/writer cause I'm from Germany but still some sentences/paragraphs are hard to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eevee, Vaporeon, Flareon, Jolteon, Umbreon, Espeon, Glaceon, Leafeon, Sylveon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A lot of people are talking shit in the comments about how trash the story is. I have my own personal opinions on how some matter were handled, but I'd also like to remind everyone that this story ended seven years ago, and started a decade ago. Ragging on someone's older works in 2021/2022 doesn't mean jack shit, since it doesn't reflect on whether they've improved or not as a writer. |
![]() ![]() Shit story from a shit author |
![]() ![]() ![]() In my honest opinion I find the shiny Dratini and Dragonair are very pretty Pokémon but I just don’t like the Dragonites color, no offense |
![]() ![]() ![]() uh, Jasmine is the Gym Leader of Olivine City, not Koga's daughter. Koga's daughter is named Janine. |
![]() ![]() I just realized that the Arceus-Zenith thing is exactly like Kami and Demon King Piccolo, and then later the Namekian we all know and love |
![]() ![]() Lemon deleted REEEEEE |
![]() ![]() ![]() What's up with this redundant stuff? A simple "he then told the story about how squirtle" shit style. It sucks. |