I personally think u should've gave ash litwick and sabrina haunter

Wow... Interesting...

I like this story especially the rayshipping ( it is actually scary how much similarities Ash and Cynthia have) ships like amourashipping make no sense because Ash forgot Serena existed and still to this day doesn’t remember the first time they met (probably the most one sided ship ever plus Ash literally treats Serena like another friend).

You write so well! I can't wait to read more

Damn Sabrina is ooc

I'm in a turmoil right now, the story is ridiculous as well as intriguing at the same time

Y'know the arceus part could have been a bit less repetitive.
Though nothing can be said abt out now as there'd story has an sequel and a sequel for it sequel

It's kind of cute seeing Cynthia as a younger girl,
Im not a ray shipper, I used to be a amour shipper (in my opinion) as it was the only ship in canon which was a 2 way shipping,
No offence to other shippers

Great

It really seems like Ash is too op in this. i don't know if you would balance it out in the future but I guess I could read more of this for now.

Wait wasn't his dad a business man in the 1st chapter? How did he become a ranger now?

Johto is spelled Johto not Jhoto.

I like how Arceus is just stalking Ash and basically giving him strong Pokemon.

You could probably go over this story looking for spelling and grammar errors. I like the plot though. Good job.

Ash's Pokedex was only for the Kanto region so Pokemon like Riolu and Togepi couldn't be scanned since they aren't from the Kant region.