| Reviews for A Legend is Born |
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   bauers374 chapter 24 . 3/16/2020 Ya know, I won't blame CriticUnited this time... Because They're 13... writing a Sex Scene between two minors is illegal... |
| bauers374 chapter 23 . 3/16/2020 When you remember the original Sprite for Sabrina had a whip... |
| bauers374 chapter 18 . 3/15/2020 Oh, It's Only One pokemon Asleep at a time... That makes a lot more sense... |
| bauers374 chapter 18 . 3/15/2020 Ugh... Sleep Clause... SMH... It's so stupid...Just imagine if you put a pokemon to sleep, then it wakes up next turn... Now you never get to put another of your opponent's pokemon to sleep again...And I don't know why OHKo moves are Verboddin, They have such low Accuracy that to abuse it you have to get creative... Swagplay and ParaFlinch are Legitiment Strategies... no matter what THEY say... |
| bauers374 chapter 17 . 3/15/2020 Oh god, why is Sabrina acting like Tharja... |
| bauers374 chapter 14 . 3/15/2020 Oh God, I'm getting Blair Witch vibes from this Now... |
| Hufflepuffzd96 chapter 17 . 3/12/2020 are we sure that Sabrina isn't a Power Ranger with how much purple she wears |
| Hufflepuffzd96 chapter 9 . 3/10/2020 so we already know that Mew is playful/Childlike, but to see him calling Arceus daddy is pretty funny |
| laurenroxbrough chapter 17 . 2/24/2020 You know, to be honest when I first read this chapter it made me very uncomfortable so I went back and read it again and the way Sabrina was acting it was very abusive in nature and very much like sexual harassment of Ash and it feels like in a way your trying to make Ash accept a relationship that feels uncomfortable to him that your trying make the relationship seem acceptable, when I liked where you were going with this with Cynthia that seems very realistic but you are actually forcing this relationship too much, okay they have a 'bond' but the blatant sexual undertones to this and with Ash not entirely comfortable with it makes me think that that sabrina is trying to force a sexual relationship with Ash. |
| Dilemmaoftilt30920 chapter 61 . 2/1/2020 This was a fantastic read well done |
| YaBoiMarowak chapter 1 . 1/15/2020 I want to like this story, but I just can’t. The way you write needs work. A lot of it is just explaining what a character is doing. That’s great and all, but you need to also tell us what the characters are thinking and put it into your own voice. It’s just really dry to read right now. |
| Jackal chapter 1 . 12/20/2019 Been ok so far, seriously wished you had a beta reader though, just to smooth out the story telling |
| TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 1 . 11/1/2019 Interesting. |
| Mermaid's Magic chapter 16 . 10/23/2019 ... wonder how the workers would react to the fact they had been locked up due to the 2 legendary birds doing so... |
| Mermaid's Magic chapter 12 . 10/23/2019 well you did put it up against Pikachu, so I was hoping that you would make it evolve, I love Magikarp and Gyarados,! |