Reviews for A Legend is Born |
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![]() ![]() Beating an elite 4 member was stupid. If thats the case ge has no more room for improvement now and with him this flipping strong now the rest of the book is gonna get real boring real fast. |
![]() ![]() Ok he shouldnt of been able too beat an elite 4 member you moron. |
![]() ![]() Yeah please never ever have him call lucario 'son' again please. That was just weird! |
![]() ![]() ![]() One thing i wish you did in this story is find a way for ash to carry all of his pokemon |
![]() ![]() ![]() not a deal breaker but just a note it drives me nuts when ppl start addressing everyone as brother, it's one thing to declare they r brothers or state they r like a brother but like to just address them as brother or sister drives me nuts |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome to Mew in a universe where Pokémon can learn more than 4 moves. Broken as hell |
![]() ![]() ![]() How can you be from the UK with this shit english. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Be more realistic will you? She is a gym leader for a reason, the league wouldn't have put her there if scrabs like them can just go and steal pokemons. Tram rocket would have fucked them up so bad. Get your fucking head to think |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! This is like the 3rd or 4th time I've read it! Wonderful job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() here's a question... if Arceus is god... who does he pray to? |
![]() ![]() ![]() you have charizard call starmie "Jewel face" I think "purple punk" would have been a better insult coming from charizard |
![]() ![]() It's quite well written. I unfortunately simply dislike the newer pokemon. I like them up to and including johto and there after I find most of them shit... This translates into my loosing interest in pokemon stories the moment these newer pokemon enter it... As such, good story but not for me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wheres tracy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um you know you can have lemons in stories as long as its rated M. This is fanfiction not baby fiction. Besides I've seen some heavy lemons b4. Plus as long as you give a warning of start and finish there shouldnt b a problem |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lucario is 4 ft |