Reviews for Commanders of Chaos: Meeting
randomer11 chapter 1 . 4/7
Out of characterooc
Original character oc
Mary Sue is a perfect character that can't do anything wrong and is brilliant at everything
randomer11 chapter 2 . 4/4
O_o
I'M FREAKING OUT!
WRITE MORE NOW!
THIS IS BRILLIANT
Guest chapter 2 . 3/16
hey will this be continued
Queens of Hell chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
the formatting needs some work and there's a couple of misspellings, but otherwise its pretty good.
-Anya
Guest chapter 2 . 3/10/2014
More
Guest chapter 2 . 11/1/2013
FINISH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH
Guest chapter 2 . 9/7/2013
Keep going I can barely find any decent chaos Percy stories
Your Benefactor chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
This seriously sucks, you could at least have made it original, or used good grammar, it honestly sucks, and ignore the other bullshit reviews.
Therna Blakeheart chapter 2 . 6/29/2013
MORE!
Darkmoon111 chapter 2 . 6/23/2013
I like the idea of Percy, Thalia and Nico adventuring around instead of finding Chaos in, like, 5 minutes. Love it!
Anaa chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
OOC is out of character, OC is original character and i think a Mary Sue is a character that is perfect and has no flaws. Hope this helps. Great Story too.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/27/2013
Plz write more its good
Crimson chapter 2 . 5/18/2013
Are you going to continue this story?
candyland7 chapter 2 . 4/7/2013
Again he really didn't destroy it the first time.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
OOC means Out Of Character oc is a character you made up I don't know what Mary sue is.
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